Wisecreas Wizarding Equipment ideas/ author thoughts?

So firstly

If y'all read my fics you will know I have a harry potter au fic featuring kid! yerim and exo

to be honest, it was meant to be started up as an adoption/ lodging home for children suffer from abusive parents and wanted a place to stay during the holidays, so they didn't have to go back to their abusive households for the holidays or spend Christmas on their own in the school 

Should I stick to my idea now, which is just exo raising kid yeri, or should I add in my original idea?

I feel like i may run out ideas for kid yeri or this may just turn into a fluffy tooth rotting fic dump with not much of a plot (tbh I'm not sure of the original idea will have a proper plot but hmmmmmmmmm) and so the second idea may seem appealing ? I could develop on the other kids relationships, although it'll still center around Yeri and the other kids wouldn't be around during the most of the year since they have school 

I'm not sure either ways so if you do happen to red my fic, please help me out!! 

 

 

Secondly

Regarding my other fics, Itrying my hardest to churbout idea but for some of them I've hit an idea slump where i cnt continue writing drafts? Most of my drafts have at least 500-2000 words but I still don't know how to continue them so please wait patiently... I'm sorry for taking so long)):

Maybe after I watch suju tv I can get my groove back for the suju request! Im only at the into and imstuck 😭😫 )):

Sorry guys and thanks for understanding 

 

And please give me some feedback + comments! 

Very very very much appreciated if you do because then at least it seems like I actually have an audience when I publish things and not just views but idk maybe I didn't write well enough to comment about and ? It just makes me a little weary and sad that I probably didn't write well enough 

 

 

 

 

Enough with the ranting 

If you actually read this , and if yu actually stayed till the end of this speech, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart 

I will try to recharge and update my fics! Thank you for your support!

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Xophias #1
About the plot, here's some (random) ideas:
-exo propose Yerim to spend her holidays with them instead of letting her go back to her hell hole
-Her parents could hate her for not being this or that (maybe if she had a brother or a sister and they died, that would crush the parents completely and wanting to project their lost child into their remaining ones, they've come to destruct the other since the child does not live up their expectations
-Also what are her background? Muggleborn? Halfblood? Pureblood? If muggleborn, her parents could come to also hate her from being different because of fear but relectuantly let her go to that wizarding school. If halfblood, you culd still play the fear of the unknown card, who knows one parent taking in charge the child could be a muggle and hate the other parent for not letting her know of the wizarding world etc. If Pureblood, there could be some heavy pressure coming from a society and her close one themselves, all are about "not being enough" and a child not being able to fulfill the desires of adults.
-If you want a plot that match up with the wizaring world, what if yerim did nightmares and a monster would feed from them and her fears and becoming stronger and stronger with everything she's providing it to the point where it becomes material/physical and a shadow that follows and haunts her
Xophias #2
^Maybe you could do both:
For example, Yerim would be with her abusive family but then she gott have to go to Hogwarts and there she meets exo members who are several grades up from hers and they notied that something is wrong with yerim and decide to know a little more about her and not wanting to make assumptions they decide to confirm their suspicious, you could add a female, who'd be a sister figure for yerim and makes her discover how caring a "family" can be (along with exo)
Maybe when developping friendship with other kids, you could show the effects of the abuse on her social life, would she isolate herself? Maybe if the abuse started at the beginning of the story, like something traumatic happens to their family and the parents leash out on yerim to let out their frustrations rather than coping, it would be after the beginning of school and maybe yerim would have made herself friendly to other and therefore her change of attitude would be more obvious for others.
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