DVD commentary meme

the DVD Commentary Meme

Pick a passage of ~500 words from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic. Well, as much as I remember anyway xP

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cheapchip #1 Jul 10, 2018 14:14:02

definetely the taco and nacos in stop and stare
Tiffany gets hungry and orders a basket of hashtag fries and another one of nachos.
“Hey,” she leans over and stage whispers to Jessica. “Do you want to taco ’bout it?”
“About what?” Jessica asks, bewildered.
“Jessi,” she whines. “You’re supposed to say ‘it’s nacho business’!”
Taeyeon snorts so loudly she almost chokes on her drink – a Pomegranate Martini, her fifth drink of the night and one Jessica had tried to talk her out of ordering to no avail – and Tiffany turns her pout on her.
“That had the potential to be great, TaeTae.”
“It did,” Taeyeon says diplomatically.

and that whole lapslock thing 😁