Hello Everyone!

I've been working on a choose-your-own-adventure type story for like 3 years now (had the idea before Kris and others left and started it before everything happened, so it is OT12 and im not going to put in the effort to change it all cause it took me 3 years of sporatic writing to get this much done and im not even halfway).

The story is a fantasy story that has HELLA plot holes and jumps like it's an anxious cricket, but im really tired and i dont think imma put the effort in to close all the holes. does anyone want to help me read through what i have? give some suggestions?

like i said, it isn't even halfway done, but i want to finish this story before i die. it's supposed to be a fun read (gives me goosebumps at times because it's lame at points, but it's too late to change it now ha.)