Can someone review my poster?

It's been a while since I've done graphics and I currently have writer's block. So I decided to do some random graphics and writing some random stuff. I ended up making a random romance poster of ship that I recently started to like. Jangjun (Golden Child) x Sujeong (Lovelyz). I'm an InfinitexLovelyz shipper but man this is too cute >.< Maybe I could actually write a short story about them :D we'll see if you guys think it's a good idea.

So anyway, I was hoping if someone could review this poster. It's a simple graphic and I was aiming for a romantic vibe. I'm not sure how I went especially in typography (that's my weakest point). But I was hoping to get someone's advice. Thanks :)

If anyone needs to (for some reason), here are the original pictures of the idols. 

 

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tumbleweed #1
I like the photo manipulation and the couple seems like they were legit together for the shoot! I'd point out that the girl's neck is a little too ... "cut out" in terms of taking her outline; possibly soften that part down somehow. The coloring is well done but I think you could add a few more textures to the edges of the poster or add a little touch of 'pink air' if that makes sense; gives it that lovey kind of theme.
I don't think your fonts were bad choices; reading some previous comments, I'd have to disagree about the main font looking thriller-like; it /could/ be used that way but the softness of the going up are complimentary to romantic themes which is, again, not bad of a font to be used in the poster! I feel like the "for you" part in your title is a little too big and spaced down. Try to add like a glowing effect to it and lessen the size. Experiement with additional features like possibly a line that goes on both ends of 'for you!'
Hm. I also believe that the title overall is a little big and just like splat on the page; it goes too far near the edges and people just see it as a title rather than an element of your poster. You can try warping a smaller title (not too much to the point where it looks absure and not legible).

Overall though, the poster was well-made and I think it has potential to attract readers. I hope my input helps and good luck with further designing! (-:
KaihleeLo #2
I’m no professional but here’s my two cents xD The title’s font for “falling” sort of scream action/thriller more than romance. The colors overall made the poster slightly angsty. I don’t know if you’re also aiming for angst but xD

Otherwise from a nobody’s POV this was beautiful. Your photoshop skills are on point~ and yasssss to Jangjun x Sujeong! Been shipping them for a while xD
SheirynFiya #3
It looks good! almost thought they both were in the same original picture together
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