SWITCH mv+schoolAU fanfic

sooooo......... I read this Jaeyong fanfic on WATTPAD about one or two months ago(i think), it was good and since there was a lack of Jaeyong fanfics I decided to read it, the plot was cliche, since it was schoolAU author decided to do the "2 different schools, one prep and the other has bad kids" thing, so despite being a cliche plot, it always seems to make me read more of the story, anyways about 8 chaps past after I read it, the way the characters were protrayed was a bit weird to me; i thought that it will seem to be fun since jaehyun character was in the prep school and despite being a cutie, he's the most muscular in NCT in real life and TY who's image was a fierce, charismatic leader but is coincidentally the mother hen of the group, a neat freak, hates excercising but...................

 

in  the story he wasn't good at cooking(like seriously), loves almost every sport(when will??), AND STUFFED Doyoung's locker with cockroaches and WORMS....... like seriously I thought it would be very interesting because I thought that the author will add bits of their REAL personalities into the story but....... it was very farfetched....... esp with Taeyong's character, like WTf*dge? 

I KNOW I'M IN NO POSITION TO REACT like this because I'm just a reader but but but-   STILL???

soo since some of you my dearest friends are authors, may you have the time to write a Jaeyong fanfic, SchoolAU style as seen from the Switch mv, but please Taeyong in the Public school; and Jaehyun in the Prep school, and Mark also('cause I'm pretty sure they fit in)...... and can you make Lee brothers come true please

I don't care how it's done or who are the side-couples but please keep my canons??????? 

i wish it's my birthday so I can say that it can be your B-day gift to me but my birthday is in October T...............T

 

please anyone who is willing??? i will be very thankful, jinja 

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Blue_PIX
#1
SORRY! I tried taking a break from AFF bcs updates that time were really slow but then I guess it was more than successful since I almost forgot to open it until now, and it's all thanks to the anime fanfics that i got absorbed in recently... but if you're still willing....please please please..... and..... thank you thank you!

1. it depends on you, i'm okay as long as the story is good and there are no grammatical errors that will confuse my head/eyes
2. I ship Markhyuck, so I'm pretty much okay with..
3. i'll connect this with number 4
4. the 3rd sentence, the one where everyone thinks he's a jerk and a bad boy bcs he doesn't talk much or actually interact with anyone but his friends, and will accidentally glare at anyone who meets his eyes but he doesn't know that he actually did something remotely close to that and yea, in reality/ at home he's actually the smol clumsy babyish mother of the group
5. yea, sth like that, tho the members in their group aren't actually BAD guys but yea, they cause some trouble here and there and ofcourse get detention, they aren't that kind of bad people tho, they have enemies, yes, but they won't be the ones to start the fight, so in a way they're like supposed to be a "normal" group who does trouble bcs that's what people think they do, but mostly they just keep t themselves, Yongie isn't really part of the group but gets dragged you know, he wants to be w/ his friends and try to keep them out of trouble but sometimes is actually the reason why trouble keeps going after them
6. Jaehyun has group too, yes, they aren't really considered a "gang" but they sometimes do not-so good and not-so proper things, and Jaehyun mostly just goes with the flow, he doesn't really involve himself most times but unlike Taeyong he doesn't try to stop them, but they don't get the stereotype "bad guys, gang" given to TY's friend group cuz they are from a private school

p.s. I just really want Mark to be in the same school as Jaehyun and they somehow have this brother-like companionship, which means Jaeyong will be more connected

for the rest, ehh, i just want a nice story that's all..... I really don't know anything with love stories, I'm someone who you could easily please....so....

THANKIES!!!!!
rainydaymp3
#2
helloo ;;; i know this is a really late respond, but i am wondering if you are still interested in a fill for this prompt ?

i have an idea for a fanfic based on this, but i am afraid that it will only be a oneshot instead of a multichapter. the fic will probably focus more on jaeyong's relationship, and how it would be like if they were in rival schools; a romeo & juliet-like relationship.

your request is: 1) jaeyong 2) switch/high school au 3) jaehyun in prep school & taeyong in public school 4) taeyong & mark as brothers 5) a more realistic characterisation

so far, i have these in minds. i would like to ask if you are okay with these or if there is anything you would like to change. ^^
1) i really want to explore how jaeyong (and the other nct members) would be like in high school. high school students do not have the same maturity as adults, and i am interested in exploring how jaeyong would be like before they mature into the persons they are now.
2) there might be markhyuck. would that be okay...?
3) taeyong is an introvert and i want to explore how taeyong would be like, a introvert in a problematic public school.
4) do you want to have taeyong as a bad boy/troublemaker? or do you want him as a misunderstood bad boy? people think he is a troublemaker bcs he wears eyeliner and all black and murmurs welcome to the black parade every day, but he is actually a smol clumsy bean on the inside who makes bento for his brother and friends.
5) taeyong in a "gang"'or sth? i think if he joined one it is bcs his friends are there and he just wants to keep them from getting into trouble. do you want them to rlly be a troublemaker, or just some ppl who pull lots of prank, or is just a "normal" group in a problematic public school but ppl always view them to be trouble too.
6) or maybe there are groups that actively battle each other... sometimes violently, but jaeyong is not part of it. they know that being involved in each other's life will get them into trouble, and so they have to be discreet about it? and if their groups are battling, it would be a water gun fights like in switch mv?

(just saying, but i think it is aright to react the way you did. all authors are different. i, personally, will jump on the opportunity to have my readers comment on my characterisation. writing an in-character fic means a great deal to me. and knowing if (and where) i did wrong is how i can improve. some authors, however, may not take the criticism well. you did nothing wrong by rambling about your frustration, especially since you did not mention which fic it is.)

thank you... for reading this ;;;;;;;