Review: English for Dummies

Title: English for Dummies

Author: lietothedevil

Published: Dec 5,2015

Status: Complete; Chaptered

Description:

Jeonghan’s close to failing his English class. If he doesn’t pull up his grades he’ll be benched and his starter position on the basketball team taken away. Luckily for him his English teacher says she found a tutor for him; a native speaker who moved to Korea a few years ago. Joshua Hong is the English tutor Jeonghan’s been looking for: patient, sweet, and teaches in a way so the English actually makes sense. Joshua being easy on the eyes is just an unexpected bonus.

 

Plot Review: I can say that it is cliché but very catchy. You are able to make it brief but informative which is good. You were not able to give away the whole story but you make me curious what will happen.

Plot Point: 8/10

Character Review: For your characters, you did a very good job. You portray each and every one differently. You gave them uniqueness. The way they move even when speaking you can see the them.

Character Point: 10/10

Story Review: The story flow is basically your asset. Each chapter of your story is complete yet you make me anticipate what will happen next and that is good. In making a chaptered fic you just don’t put everything in one chapter because it will make your next chapter boring. Readers anticipation can be your goal in writing. I have read the full fic and I can say that you achieve that. I was satisfied with the chapter but still looking forward to the next. You explain the situation clearly so I was able to image what is happening I gave you a thumbs up for that. For the length of chapter, well I am impressed. I know for the fact that the longer the story is the harder to write. Yours is not just a 100 words per chapter so give yourself a pat on the back. I can’t give you a comment in your grammar for I, myself, is not good with it. English is not my first language (you might see some grammar error here, my apologies). Overall it is great.

Story Point: 70/80

OVERALL STORY POINT: 88/100

PS: I AM IN NO POSITION TO REVIEW TO YOUR FIC! I AM SO INLOVE WITH YOUR WRITING! GOOD LUCK!

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lietothedevil
#1
Hahaha thank you. It's not a problem. Thank you for this.