as a casual viewer I think it looks nice enough. good job :)

Some tips/advice:
- I'd personally choose a different font type, the placement is okay though ^^
- What is the red piece next to Amber's head? I think it's a part of layer you forgot to brush away.
I can spot more parts you forgot to blend better. Mainly around her head ^^
- Amber is way bigger than Krystal, which could be either funny or weird.
In this case, for me, it's not working as the difference is too little.
- Amber's hand is chopped off little awkwardly :P hehe.
- Perhaps adding a fun color filter would be nice too?

I like how you positioned Amber. I like how their clothing matches too. I like the 'hinding in the bush' idea as a metafor!

Amber looks cool! :) good job.