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Only Memories

Title ; 6/10
The title doesn't really fit your story and I understand what you're trying to tell us, the readers, from the title itself but the word 'memories' is usually used for something or someone that has left completely; passed away or memory of a teddy bear that you adored and it has been disappeared. Maybe you can change the title into something like, 'In The Past', but it's just a suggestion of mine.

Description and Foreword 18/20
It's short yet compact and full with what the story is about. Since it's a one-shot, I like how you would not spoil much in your foreword but wrote an author note there instead. The reason why I reduce the score is the description might have a few grammar mistakes that I will list down at the grammar section.

Plot and Story Development; 19/30
There isn't any concrete plot in the one-shot and it's just a short story between six pairs of pairings that either having a bad future or a beautiful future. However, there isn't any in this story making it a little boring and just plain. What have Tao done to Kris? The readers would like to know about that too, maybe you can write more and think of more ideas if you want your one-shot to be longer and fuller with details and it will be easier for the readers to understand what your story is about as well.

Grammar; 14/20
First and foremost, I'm not sure if you decided to use present tense or past tense in this one-shot because I saw those two tenses in one sentence and I'm confused. You might be confused by it as well but I hope you will use only one tense at a time in the future. In the foreword, you wrote, 
1. "But some things never change and some other things change too much." 
and you should change the word 'but' to 'however' because the word 'but', we can only use it in the middle of a sentence.
2.Since the first sentence of the story is a flashback, you might want to use italics there.
3. "Luhan woke up from the dream of the night where he had left Sehun. It has been two years, yet every night the same dream visits him the moment he closes his eyes."
'woke up' and 'visits' are two different tenses.
4. "Luhan sobbed on his own that night, both of his palms covering his wet face, the same way he did nights before."
'sobbed' was used but the sentence before have 'is', 'smiles' so it's very confusing.
If you want me to list down more, it will be enough to cover the whole page so it will be best if the author can contact me personally instead. 

Enjoyment; 15/20
Overall, I like reading this one-shot but if you correct the mistakes or republish a whole new story with the same idea of this one but in a much better version than this one, would be the best! Oh, and please contact me personally if you need more help according to the story.

Total; 72/100 : D