KAI FANFIC..PLEASE HELP

So I started writing a Kai fanfic but I need some feedback, I still need to edit but I would appreciate feedback from someone else, it would help me even more!

I hope you like it overall!!!

 

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1147137/the-hidden-ones-exo-kai-love-kaiexo-kimjongin-kaifanfic-kai000exo

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