NEW TO AFF...PLEASE HELP

I've been meaning to write a fanfic and open an account and I finally did! I hope I make good friends and I hope you guys can check out my upcoming story here!

Please tell me what you think, I would love some honest feedback!

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1147137/the-hidden-ones-exo-kai-love-kaiexo-kimjongin-kaifanfic-kai000exo

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eee356
#1
I am a big freaking fan of long forewords. I think its a huge + XD ... or maybe not. But at least my newest fic has it long. I dont like doing it short.. anyway, Im interested in reading your story. I can give you my opinion by a message when i'll be on my comp
exofangurl99
#2
i think your story is going to be good , but i think its better for you to cut down on your foreword a little bit because its quite long . some people maybe be too lazy to read all that and just skip your fanfics . Its better for you to make a short and compact foreword that can create curiosity and excitement among the readers to subscribe and reads your fanfics . that's just my opinion , and welcome to AFF ^^ i'm also quite new here
DolphinWorld
#3
Welcome to AFF! Hope you find some good friends here ^^