Helppp!!!

I really need to update soon for my subbies who are waiting but I'm not really sure on what to write for my next chapter.... I mean like Jiyeon's sad/angry at BTS right now(that's how the chapter ended) but like should she forgive them now or like ignore them except V (She's not mad at V, he's still the 4d alien!) Den like Bts has to woo her over again!! I need help!! Please comment or message me on what should I do!!! It would really help me out I you do!! \ ( O•o) / (Oh and if your wondering this story is called '12 Wolves & 7 Vampires' Its a Exo Bts fanfic with Park Jiyeon from T-Ara as the main character if you haven't figured it out yet) Please help me!! T^T

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iliket-ara #1 Aug 13, 2015 12:38:04

I like your idea of Jiyeon ignoring all of them except for V and the rest of BTS try to her love them again! Just update soon, I love your story!

LIUtheSONE #2 Aug 13, 2015 07:15:46

you can write why the BTS boys are being like that, and then let them confront each other? im not sure becauseim not author material xD:3

FruityBooTae #3 Aug 13, 2015 05:27:55

I think, you should slow down the tempo your story is going. Maybe writing about how she's feeling about them? And her mood swings, like one second she'll feel like ripping their hearts out *please no TT^TT* and the next she wants to heal back their broken pieces ?? :))) I still think your story is moving too fast since the first time I read it. There is too little lines and many scenes changing in those few words. It's hard to keep track since I feel like.....okay.

Let's say, I read a para of one of your chapter then in the next para, the place totally changed along with the mood/scenario. Then, I'd be like 'What the fudge just happened?' and I have to reread the previous para or chapter just to understand one line.
And I think you should describe about your characters more, and not just plainly stating out facts and sentences. The readers will be interested to read more and more until finally find themselves at a MAJOR cliffhanger. *or a soft ending* XD Hope this helped ma fwienddd~ xDD