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An assassin has only one job: to kill. They never miss their mark and they always get the job done. Even if they wanted to escape the life of an assassin, it follows them with the smell of death constantly surrounding them. So what is there left to do but kill?

Foreword

Hello I'm back with my second story! This one is between Yongguk and a ficitional character named Sae Kyung. It'll be much longer than the other story I wrote so please enjoy! Feedback is always welcome and I love reading comments so don't hold back and talk to me :) 

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BanaWarrior #1
Chapter 9: Well, she's alive, they have time until things explode and this exchange between her and Yongguk was way more than anything I was expecting from them, really! o.o But there is hope for them ;w; It's not big, but it's there.
Things could be worse. I hope Himchan can get well soon and that no one else get's hurt. ;w;
jayparkaom #2
Chapter 8: Omg so intense! Update soooonplease
BanaWarrior #3
Chapter 8: O. m.g my heart almost stopped there!!
Thanks God he's stable! And I really wish Saekyung will not get herself killed. ;-;
KirinJidai #4
Chapter 7: Awww, Yongguk is so cute, you wouldn't expect it from the outside <3 This chapter is so sweet, but I also look forward to the storm that's about to come. Very nice, thanks for writing <3
KirinJidai #5
Chapter 5: Ahaha, that extra part was gorgeous xD I like how it switches from that serious and gloomy mood to something funny, it gives a nice contrast with the "main" story <3
Great chapter, I wonder how she's gonna get out of that situation o3o
LaurenLay #6
nice !! keep it up !
Lulasanta #7
Chapter 4: I really like the your style of writing. It's a good pace and this story seems to be really interesting. The first chapter had me hooked and this has left me wanting more :) I'm looking forward to reading more!
damnitlrh #8
Chapter 1: omg finally a good blockbap fic yay!! i love your writing honestly, keep it up!
And I thought she was kidnapped lmao guess i'm wrong
KirinJidai #9
Chapter 4: I was just looking through a few recently updated fics and found this treasure here. Since there is no comment yet, here you go with an extra large one! xD
I like your style of writing a lot, it has something mysterious to it, yet it gives the reader many small details, like Youngjae who's examining the situation all the time or those little gestures that don't seem of much importance at first glance.
The concept of the story is nice, too. The way Block B behaves fits with what we know of them in real life, with their playful attitude, like in Very good or Jackpot. Furthermore, B.A.P is characterized very well too with Zelo being very mature for his age (Well, he has to be) and Daehyun as a ladies' man or even Jongup who is more in the shadows of the background, yet noticing everything.
The extra was really cool as well, I like it!
I hope it was okay to write this much, some authors don't like answering those long comments, but I felt like I just had to tell you this, you're a good writer and I'm totally looking forward to reading the whole story! Fighting <3
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