Chapter 3: I really enjoyed this lol but wish Kyungsoo didn't die. I hope you write more horror of chansoo again in the future ♡_♡
Thank you for writing and sharing this creepy AF fanfic! Lol.

Chapter 3: This is so perfect. The anxiety and thrilling are at peaks while reading this fic. I srsly wish the ending would be different(in favor of Ksoo) But still, I like it tho. Thank you author-nim. If possible, plz write epilogue :)

Chapter 3: SHT! for the second thought though I thought that Chanyeol would spare Kyungsoo because they could obviously worked it out because they're in love and all that . BUT I CANT! OMG this is the third(?) time I think that I have read a plot like this and THIS THIS IS REALLY THRILLING! I mean I am anticipating what would happen gosh I think I will never be alone with a doll again. Thankyou for this authornim!

Talk about a creepy fic....
The ending was predictable but when i got to it i still felt shivers run down my spine. Omfg like i barely even get to encounter fics with actual dark!yeol like wHY IS DARK!YEOL SO UNDERRATED I LOVE ME SOME SCARY PCY IM--
hahahahah but really..... I dont know if i should actually feel sorry for kyungsoo or not. With all that he did he actually kinda had it coming for him. Had he just listen to his gut tHE WAY HE ING SHOULD HAVE none of this might have happened (might. Bec lets be real i feel like if kyungsoo didnt score a solo interview with yeol in the waiting room, yeol would totally have found a way to steal kyungsoo away after that intense eye ing at the conference-- kidding). But honestly i feel like a huge part of this was kyungsoos fault in the end because he should have stayed away from the get-go. His pride or desire for fame was really his fatal flaw..... Oh well.
Idk really how you would feel about my comment since youre the writer of this very creepy story, but im not even mad at yeol because like??? I feel like there was no changing or saving yeol so like..... It was really soo's fault but. HAHAHAHAH
aaah but im not really mad at any of the characters. In fact actually imagining exo's dead bodies so well preserved omg that was the creepiest thing. But my most fave scene was when yeol showed soo his collection for the first time and soo moved to the dollhouse and he saw his lookalike doll and yeol came up to him and said that soo looks like the doll oMFG ING CREEPY
LOLLLLLL hehe what an exciting read hehe xoxoox thanks for writing and sharing!!

Chapter 3: OMGGG i love it! It was so creepy and lunatic yeol omg omgggg.this was the best thing ever ♥

Chapter 3: OH MY. This is so freaking cool!!!! I loved this, this was so... Idk how to describe it but !!!!!!! This is so PERFECT. 10/10 *^*

Chapter 3: I'm glad I didn't finished it at night XD
Still can't believe you really... did it to chansoo :'((

Chapter 3: YES I am SCARED I am going to have BAD dreams tonight

Chapter 3: I must say, you have a good style in writing this kind of genre. However, I'm disappinted that your plot is predictable from the start of your first paragraph in the story and the fact my theories that the story will end being "Chanyeol's friends' are human taxidermies and Kyungdoo would end up like too was confirmed the moment Chanyeol revealed his skills in taxidermy. It would be better if you develop the skill of throwing your reader's attention from the obvious and not giving too much hints of what the story would become. I also suggest for you, if ever you'll plan to write more horror stories in tge future, to add more plot twists because making the readers think of what will happen next is a sign of good writing rather than letting them sit and laying out the events to unfold without them needing to think (because being anxious of what will happen next adds to the thrill)

A good story tgat may help you delve deeper into the true meaning of good horror stories is Der Marchenclub by pinboo, also found on this site. If you haven't read it, please do because it is such a ing masterpiece and also it may help you hone your abilities as a writer of this genre.

with that said, I hope no offense was taken and that you can see this comment as a tip for improvement. I can see a possibilty of you becoming a good writer of horror stories given that you don't have problems with grammar and your pacing isn't rushed nor it is dragging. (also, I suggest you to use more gruesome and morbid choice of words as this would make these types of stories impactful and adds up to the reaction this story evokes from your reader.

Omg this was sooo good~ authornim ^^