The Curse

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One-shot that will blow your mind.

Foreword

7 friends entered a creepy, desolated mansion for an adventure. Never did they expect to be in for a ride that will change their lives forever.

A story in search of the definition of friendship, happiness and love, about jealousy, betrayal, secrets, lies and the regrets.

 

Characters

Umika (Kawashima) (Second year high school student; younger sister of Hikaru; best friend of Suzuka)

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Hikaru (Yaotome) (Third year high school student; older brother of Umika; popular among female students)

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Yamada Ryosuke (third year high school student; favourite friend of the clique; closest with Chinen; popular among among female students)

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Takaki Yuya (Third year high school student; underground relationship with Haruna)

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Chinen Yuri (Third year high school student; closest friend with Ryosuke)

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Kawaguchi Haruna (Third year high school student; underground relationship with Yuya)

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Ohgo Suzuka (Second year high school student; best friend with Umika; huge crush on Ryosuke)

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Shida Mirai (?)

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joules13 #1
Too many Sues.
hazel_duhds #2
Chapter 2: thankyou for making part 2 of dz, this is quite deep and with a different twist. looking at the title of the chapter makes me think this is not a yamashi its ryosuke-umika continuation, though its hard for me to absorb, its really really hard to absorb author-san cuz despite all the sad situation that ryosuke kills his friends to avenge mirai and then after 5 years umika and rosuke have seen each other then he will realized that he loves umika., in reality this is impossible (but who knows maybe there are people like this). hehehe =)
really thank you for this atleast we know what happen after that incident.
and i will wait for the PS: I LOVE YOU.
beyond_limits13 #3
Chapter 2: Thanks for updating! Though I just have to be honest that I'm not really a fan of Ryosuke and Umika being together. It's not because I'm a loyal YamaShi (Well, this is also a factor) but also because of the story itself... I don't think it's right for Umika to fall for the person who killed her friends and almost killed her and her brother. Well, yes she is very kind and compassionate and all, and I'm not saying that Ryosuke doesn't deserve forgiveness... but, I just think it's not right. It's kind of like a psychological case I've read where a victim (of or kidnapping, etc.) falls for their assailant. And I just couldn't grasp that. *sigh*

I'm so sorry for saying too much ne! You have a great plot and idea for your story... Maybe I just wasn't comfortable with it being a love story after a case of murder. Furthermore, the murderer and the almost-murdered victim. And following the story, I really thought that it wouldn't be easy for both parties to forgive and most especially forget the things that happened just like that. I hope you won't get offended with my comment ne, I just want to share my thoughts and try to give a constructive critism. T.T Please don't get mad at me. I actually like the Curse part 1, I'm just not a fan of the afterstory...
themisberry #4
Chapter 2: I just hope that ryosuke will be together with mirai forever. I just dont see umika with ryosuke.
This make me sad.
:'( anyhow, thanks for the story
beyond_limits13 #5
Chapter 1: This is an amazingly written story. Just wow... The twists, the characters, story behind the murder, it was all really thought of and though it is long, it never felt draggy. I was feeling the tension, the fear, the dread all while reading this. And most especially, I felt the pain. Knowing why Ryosuke became a bloody murderer in this story is just so painful. Gawd. The characters here, especially Suzuka's, are hateful. Yes, they really are the picture of human nature in its worst. Yet, I still don't think anyone deserves to be murdered. And Umika's character is much loved though I'm not really wishing for her and Ryosuke in this story. It just won't be right, I think.

*sigh* Now, my heart really hurts... I was actually hoping Ryosuke will just die and won't survive just so that he'll be free from all the pain and the hurting, and so that he'll finally be with the girl he really loves, Mirai.

Wah. This story... Capital AMAZING! Great work. So looking forward for more stories from you~ :) Thanks so much for sharing such an amazing work! ^,^
sayumi_yuma #6
Chapter 1: Thanks for this great story. That's human nature think and selfish, self-centered just for her/his self benefit can make all way to blame or just for her/his self sobriety.

Poor Mirai, this story about her just make me recall the character of her role one one dorama. And, I cry about this too. Kawaii soi.. Poor Mirai. T,T

Ah, and Ryosuke killer character make me more looking forward for her next movie nee. And, Poor Ryosuke too. He must experience all this because somebodyes selfish.

Thanks for this story. Ah, a little Yamashi.. <3 sweet but sad nee..
a-lighter #7
Chapter 1: this one-shot is great! as usual from u good job and thank you!
i read this when nobody is at home and it is past 10 pm. i was so scared but managed to finish it lol
thats is scary to know that ur friends betrayed urself. i meant they dun hav to kill mirai just cause of that
shes innocent why dun they make a research first.... but its too late
actually they deserved it lol (in this story only)
thumbs up again!
themisberry #8
Chapter 1: Im so selfish..i jus wanna mirai for ryosuke.and nobody else.i rooting for yamashi only..keke...however, thanks for another great story
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