If you...

Description

If only you hadn't left me...

If only you had stayed...

If only I had made you..

Foreword

This story was inspired by BIGBANGs If you

I recommend you to listen to the song while you are reading it.

I hope you guys like it <3

 

(Disclaimer: This story was inspired by BigBang's If You and I dont own neither, the song nor the chracters.)

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Kat1989 #1
Chapter 1: Great now I'm crying...... Why would you do this? Great story though.
Djatasma #2
Chapter 1: Omo I just want to curl up and cry all night. This was so good.
DragonTales #3
Chapter 1: Thank you guys so much, its just... If you makes my heart ache whenever I listen to it TT_TT
ram3n_head #4
Chapter 1: This was like a rollercoaster of guessing and emotion, I LOVED IT. ;w;
Gizibe98 #5
Chapter 1: You T_T how could u TT_TT
Lucky-seven777 #6
Chapter 1: well, that escalated :3
DanceaLittleMore #7
Chapter 1: Ok first of all how dare you
Second of all OW
Third of all i don't remember signing up for this feel trip can i have a refund

For real though, this story was haunting, and made all the worse by listening to If You. I often write song fics, and songs can really make or break the mood. The way you wrote the story, accompanied by the music, was the perfect setting for a heartbreak. I really liked that you hinted at who the characters were without explicitly stating names or distinguishing characteristics. It really leaves the story open to interpretation.
I also liked the ambiguity of the ending. One could make an argument that the narrator is finally going to move on, or that the narrator has committed suicide somehow.

Personally, my goal in writing angst is to rip out hearts as mercilessly as possible. Well congratulations, because you were very successful in ripping out mine.
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