Blackwater

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Upon his aunt's passing, her favorite nephew Zitao is revealed to have been granted her home in the southern bayous. Curious to see the place he had not visited all his childhood, Zitao decides to take a trip down to the swamplands. Yet, the bayou is much darker than he expected, there always seems to be one more shadow lingering between the trees, and his new neighbor, Yifan, is a little to reserved for Zitao's liking.

 

Foreword

This story is going to be chaptered. At the current moment this story is not rated M but this may change in the future so just be aware of this if you cannot find this story in the non-rated section at any point in time. There isn't much else I have to say other than I hope that you enjoy this story and that any inquiries, comments, and constructive criticism you may have are always welcome.

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Chapter 5: 45% complete
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LogicError #1
I like it. I hope you continue this.
B1A4Fighting7 #2
Chapter 4: Oh my god. Your writing really got to me. It was really good! ing beautiful! Like in chapter 4, where Tao was running away from whatever it was that was chasing him, I literally got scared myself and shouted, "RUN!" My sisters looked at me like I was crazy. That's how good your writing is. And when Tao and Kris about to kiss, I was reminded of my own first kiss and I was like, "Holy . I love this author" I would really love to see this updated! I'm going to subscribe and upvote! So good!
universal123 #3
Chapter 4: OMG!! the suspense is really getting to me!! this story is so good :) i love this writing style that you have chosen for this kind of unusual mystery plot!! good job!! you are doing really well :D but seriously i wish u would give some answers in future chapters!! and poor yifan.... burdened with secrets unknown... and naive innocent tao...hopefully he does not get hurt by that foul smelly monster or whatever it is. I really hope they figure things out at the end and both yifan and tao get their happy ending with tao whisking yifan away like a prince charming to the cities outside full of yifan's unspoken dreams and hope from the place that has caged yifan since his birth!!! :D and please update soon whenever it is possible for you!! :) ^ -^
heltraine #4
Chapter 4: Oh my God, the mystery is killing me!! I want to thank you for writing this fic because I'm a big fan of bayous folklore and with my baby peach in da place, I can die in peace.
Now back to the story, it pierces my little heart to see Yifan struggling with a burden that seems really dark (something related to the devil? Or kind of devilish?). Like he never had the chance to leave this life, a "forever alone" - insert sad face here - who closed his heart and his emotions. But my babe will change this situation like the Princess peach he is, I know that.
But that shadow, that noise and that rotten smell are scary as hell!! I suppose the wind is something good that protects Tao against it?
Keep the good work! Thumb up!
KouAkira #5
Chapter 4: I assume Yifan has known something about the shadow or the folk stories about where he living? >< I really miss this story...hope you can update soon or after you finished the next chapter!
exo_traitor #6
Chapter 4: im so curious what the hell
universal123 #7
Oh!!! new update!! I love how this story is moving on. Please don't lose hope! This story is so spectacular! so mysterious and so wonderful!! I love the story, its genre and the lovely naive Tao and the cautious Kris. There is so much inspiration out there and also the Hallowen is right around the corner. I belive that you can whip up some interesting some complex storyline with that brilliant mind of yours!!! I believe in you and I will be cheering for you all the all way till the end. You are a very capable talented writer!! Please believe in yourself too!! Please don't lose hope!!! Smiles and Cheers :) :)
exo_traitor #8
Chapter 3: i wouldnt want a house in the middle of the forest even if my auntie give it to me *cower in fears* yifan obviously hiding something
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