My Sunshine

Description

The series of unfortunate events that led to Yoongi meeting his ray of sunshine.

Foreword

Yoongi doesn't know what he did to receive such bad karma but maybe, just maybe, it was worth it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

First time posting anything I write, will I regret it? Only time will tell. Super nerve wracking not gonna lie, there's 100% going to be mistakes even though I tried to read it as thorough as possible. Please be kind xD

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thelyrera #1
Chapter 1: Yes, Jimin is absolutely worth it! xD
CardGames #2
Chapter 1: Great story. you've got writing skills, hun.
songforluna #3
Chapter 1: Some details seemed rather strange. Detention in university for not turning in homework is a little.... unrealistic lol.
And for the cafe to have a French name, it's actually in Spanish? Unless if jimin was supposed to correct him or something I don't really understand.
Also, the giant paragraphs made it hard to read/focus on your writing. There were plenty of parts where you could have made new paragraphs.
There was a lot of repitition of certain words that made it awkward to read at moments. For example, "banging".
I feel the story could have been been developed a little more but other than what I pointed out, it was an interesting story~
beri_aylinxD #4
Chapter 1: KWNDOAKKWNSPSJSL AKNEKXJAmwnsowk
GENIUS. NOTHING MORE AND NOTHING LESS. AND...OMGGG PKEASE NAKE IT A CHAPTERED STORY T.T ♥
taQi_tiQa180 #5
Chapter 1: Oh my god..isnt this too fluff..??yoongi's day happen to be so sick n thankful there little ball of sunshine that willing to enlighten his day :)
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