Chapter 1: I was rolling around on my bed while reading the last part. X’D Hahaha omg somebody help me-
This one-shot is really good. C’: At some parts, I could feel my heart just clenching in pain and I just go, “Aww...”

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Don’t mind me-
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Chapter 1: Heechul consoling Tao about a heartbreak is so overwhelmingly kind and supportive. While i read this story, i liked how u mentioned heechuls on expierience and how the other members got him through those times and now hes doing it for someone else since he understands and has been cared for as well. Its a great example of where someone can pass on the comfort from a body to another in the same way as long as they initiate the connection. Im suprised about the kiss they had. Ive never heard or read about a kiss that has no lust or love (or abuse) and its actually quite unique and i can see how such a kiss could be extreme;y helpful and comforting.
(Whenever i read a super junior fanfic theres usually the name mimi in there and everytime im just like thats my name yeeeeeessssss lol)

Chapter 1: This was nice! So that's what happened with Tao and Heechul. I'm glad Tao was able to find someone who could understand him and helped him. Poor baby being left like that probably does hurt, I'm sure. I could really feel how sad he was. Heechul was so supportive it was really cute. And omg they were so cute and so awkward at the same time, especially Tao haha. Cute. And the kiss! I wish it'd have been a real one but they're still too affected by what happened with their exes so it's understandable they aren't able to move on that quickly.
I liked this. It was nice to see how Suho also reacted to the situation and why Tao thinks he has no one to talk to.
Also the short part with Donghae, I chuckled at that haha.
Thank you for writing this.

I'd have never thought about them as a pairing. I'm a er for crossover pairings, especially unusual one so that already got my attention.
I remember I've read a mpreg fic about HeechulxTOP also here. It seems like HeechulxTOP is always a choice when it comes to crossover pairing haha.
The foreword of this is really interesting. I wonder what Tao went through. It got me interested. And I really like the poster, it's cute and really project the fact that this will be slightly sad/angsty.
Alright, going to go read the rest.

Chapter 1: When I first subscribed, I was intrigued because this was a pairing I never came across before. I haven't read anything about HeeTao, or I haven't been informed there was even a pair such as this one. None of my EXO-L and E.L.F friends mentioned this to me, and as EXO-L/E.L.F myself I was surprised that you actually created this. It was a daring move knowing that there's not much of a fan base and I give you my congratulations and applaud you for making it work. I never thought there would be chemistry between Tao and Heechul, and now maybe I will start looking for other fics or videos that will show this pairing as well. I'm glad you incorporated the issues that revolved these two groups to your story. You mentioned Hangeng leaving SuJu, and Kris leaving EXO. And I like how you didn't end it with them getting in a relationship because that would be too awkward knowing that Tao was still hung up on Kris. It's adorable how you call Siwon as Wonnie, Sungmi as Mimi, and Kris as Fannie. It made me remember back in the days as a hardcore fan of these two groups (I'm still a fan). Your story opened up a lot inside of me as a fan. And it opened up the hurt I've been harboring when Kris left the group, and then Tao. I like that you showed the pain for his departure, but also acceptance because you addressed that Kris was better off on his own. It was his decision, after all, and it was his experience and his personal safety so we need to let him go as a member of EXO (but this doesn't mean I stopped supporting Kris). I've found a few grammatical errors here, most were redundant but it's okay since grammar can be fixed. An example was your use of "___ and me". "Fannie and me talked" should be "Fannie and I talked". Some could just be typographical errors. All in all, it's a really cute story. :)

Chapter 1: It's so sad that this fic reflected back on what happened to EXO in real life; I think Tao was probably the most affected out of all of them. Regardless, it was sweet how Heechul offered comfort for the younger when he needed it most. I can actually imagine this happening in real life~

Chapter 1: That was both sad and really sweet. :) I never thought of this pairing before, but somehow it worked well.

Chapter 1: Oh my God, I'm about to cry. This was so sweet :')