They don't know who to blame, they don't know who to watch out for because each and everyone of them is completely normal, except for that hidden psychopath
Chapter 4: Chapter 2 is hot! After fanfic 50 shades of Seo, this is the second place LOL
Anyway, i don't want to try bet who is the psycho, it's still early..and i smell there will be some twists ahead XD
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Chapter 4: Is this going to be a mystery story? Hmm.. I'll leave some comments, don't want to waste a good idea and plot, do we?
In the real world, you can't perform an autopsy without getting the relative's consent. After that, what happened to the autopsy of Grandma Liu? One can only approximate the time of death based on the changes of the human body after death. So instead of saying an exact time, I suppose it's more on around 2-3pm. After opening the body, the forensics doctor will determine the possible cause of death. If the victim was gagged, did she die of asphyxiation first and then stabbed multiple times afterwards to confuse the investigation? If it's robbery, were there any signs of resistance from the victim? How did the crime scene look like? I know this Kryber are the main characters but being a story with mystery and murder as theme, the investigators' POV are important as well.
And since ever since you started this fic, the whole story mostly focused in one person. Right after the two main characters were introduced, the murder case was put into light right away. Hence, the other characters that were introduced lately in the story, were just for confusion.
The robber..ahh.. Is it really him? What about the side of foul play? Is it really suicide? Though the robber's identity/name isn't important, it's still vital for the investigators to negate the predicament that he is the killer. What if he's just a victim too? If he hung himself, was asphyxiation the cause of death? Were there any signs of resistance? Why did he commit suicide anyway? What is his story?
Minho..the new victim. Died almost the same way as Grandma Liu. Now I'm going to wait how you're going to unfold his death. Who is Minho in this story, and why did he have to die?
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