Untainted

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Sixth installment in the story collection 'Once Upon A Time' which got way out of hand so is now a separate chaptered fic.

 

Prompt: Tangled, 2min

 

Hope you enjoy reading ^^

 

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Ronak2min
#1
Chapter 7: Me: Who is this dude???
Taemin*runs to him, pull his collar for a kiss*

Hmmm ok so it's Minho ( I knew his eyes are blue and it was definitely him but... yeah)
I couldn't believe it was the last one... why all the good stories finish so soon? this is my second time reading this, on the first time I had so many difficulties in understanding it. Finally, I read it after a long time... I hope you write more fantasy Aus... you're awesome TT

(And the Suprise about Minho's identity was... Perfect)


^_^
Ronak2min
#2
Chapter 6: *SPOILERS*

she got what she deserves after all. what a horrible lady... you must be a heartless beast to spend so much time with the kid you kidnap and never feel a thing for him. That's show what kind of a cruel witch she was...
He got his parents and... Minho left him... GOD TT

oh-- Bother Y_Y
Ronak2min
#3
Chapter 5: Oh jongy... why you did that? for money? man... you bad.

Ok... so I can't get over that you write so good... it's just sometimes... poetic and sweet...
it got its own rhythms you know... Uh... why did had to come.. I could go without thissssss damn. But well... the kidn... no I mean his mother really love Taemin so she's here for him^^

I hate her :/ I do. she no good ... ooofff

Y_Y
Ronak2min
#4
Chapter 4: Could he get any cutter? (though he was still scared of the poor creature) yes... yes he could.
(Winding an arm around Taemin as well, deciding to stay like that a while) I was just reading, not imagining it... like on the grass and... Uh ok I did!!!
“That is even worse.” haha... too bad villainess :) too bad your plane go to waste.

^_^
Ronak2min
#5
Chapter 3: I'm so weak for this... Minho helping Taemin with his clothes. that's just pure love... ok maybe not yet... But taemin is on his way...
And God.. why Minho's so damn pretty? silver hair with blue eyes? Just kill me... It's easier TT

Y_Y Oh my heart.
Ronak2min
#6
Chapter 2: Oh-- didn't see that coming :)

^_^
Ronak2min
#7
Chapter 1: You should've known lady-- when You leave the child with his books on his own, He fly away^^
I mean... for how long she wanted to keep him there... ???
Love it ^_^
luckyamiamiami
#8
Chapter 7: Written with really beautiful
DolphinWorld
1994 streak #9
Chapter 7: The story is over! Oh no! Just like I say on all of your stories, I really enjoyed reading this too. I really didn't expect Minho to be a prince too. Not if you gave enough clues and I didn't catch it or you did keep it a secret. Either way, that was a sweet end ^^
DolphinWorld
1994 streak #10
Chapter 6: Whoa! I wasn't expecting to see Taemin lose his powers. Maybe I should have anticipated it. Anyway, this chapter was nice as usual. Can't wait to read the chapter.