go for another whirl

Description

Youngjae admits that some things are better the second time around. It only takes him around two lifetimes with Jung Daehyun to realize this, of course.

 

Foreword

 

 

A oneshot for the "Magically De-aging" prompt for this week's B.A.P. Bingo Challenge ;;!

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rubyrose00 #1
Chapter 1: reminds me of the curious case of Benjamin Button, except for the ending, I love the open ending
camiloxfric
#2
Chapter 1: This story was beautiful, warmed my heart. I just loved how you left the end of both of them in the open, I can imagine all those happy things
tennisj #3
It's an interesting story and beautiful nonetheless. I'm glad that they could still be together after numerous struggle in their early life. I'm quite interested in how you'd interpret the ending though. By the way, I really like old sassy Jae, I could totally imagine him being one XD
Bapsloli
#4
Chapter 1: Awwee (/ 휴 ㅅ 휴)/ This is so precious ♡
They were given a chance to relive a whole lifetime together in a much better way than the last.. banghim are magic makers here, but of course, I do not agree with the fact that they have to hold them on captive, way to waste time.

This was so beautiful ;^;


Though I'm really curious what would happened when they reach age zero (ㅎ ㅡ ㅎ)
like what if they turn in to babies, and starve before disappearing as whole?
Well I guess the end's up to the readers to imagine up...



I guess...
Planetariums #5
Chapter 1: I thought they would get separated again somewhere along the way but to see them go everywhere together and practically forever is just so beautiful. /cries Also because they don't know what will happen when they reach all the way to zero. I'm still glad they get to repetively live life the way they want to without all those obstacles TT
kissmeCherry
#6
Chapter 1: the story was good! :)
but I don't understand the ending ._.