Strangers, best friends or rivals?

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Kim Kibum, a five-year-old whose parents had to move from Daegu to Seoul due to his fathers new job. A shy boy that's afraid to make new friends and meet new people, until one day he met a boy, or neighbor to be more exact, named Kim Jonghyun. Being the exact opposite of Kibum, they got along surprisingly well. Building up a strong, unbreakable relationship, or so they thought.

 

Follow the story of a shy boy with a sassy personality named Kim Kibum, and the outgoing and sometimes way too friendly boy named Kim Jonghyun and their story from childhood to adulthood. How will things end? Strangers, best friends or rivals? Keep reading to find out!

Foreword

This is my first fanfic to ever post here, please be nice but criticism is appreciated to help me improve my writing!!

Comments and subscriptions are always nice, right~?? Hehe

Please enjoy~

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Cilla_04 #1
Chapter 9: I like it!!! I like it a lot! Please as soon as you can! Thank you for taking your time to write this story!
Cilla_04 #2
Chapter 7: Omg I love this chapter!! Kid Jongkey got married!! It's so cute!!
Layni17 #3
Chapter 9: I'm so glad to see you back. ;_; I won't be able to read the chapter for a bit but I'm glad you've shown back up!
xpetri #4
Chapter 8: I miss your story ..please update
Layni17 #5
Ah, you've been missing for a long time...
Will you come back?
I've missed talking to you...
And I'm worried.
Please log in soon.
daddy-jjong #6
Chapter 8: bruhhhhh i was so worried for bummie m glad he's ok ;0;
xpetri #7
Chapter 7: That was sooo cute i loveeee it ..i cant wait for your next update B-)
Layni17 #8
Chapter 7: OHMYGOD NO WAY.
THE NEST CHAPTER HAS TO BE ABOUT JONGHYUN IN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL.
It just feels like too big a jump, you know?
How many chapters do you predict this to be? I need to prepare my heart. T^T
Fabulous chapter, once again. Imma reread these chapters every time I'm waiting for an update.
I LOVE YOU.
daddy-jjong #9
Chapter 6: time-skip to preteens imo
Layni17 #10
Chapter 6: Noooooo, I want more kid chapters.
((I whine too much, sorry))
These are from my old list of suggestions:
Parks, dog parks, pet stores, malls, picnics, making cupcakes for their class, learning how to count, practicing writing the alphabet, writing sentences~
When I was in preschool ((For three days before four-year-old me decided to quit. XP)), my teachers put shaving cream on a tray and we got to play with it and do whatever we wanted on it, so long as we didn't get it on people. Oh! And my teacher had me cut out the shape of a balloon from red construction paper. And on my last day, she covered two-three marbles in red, white, and blue paint and had me swirl the box ((The kind you'd put clothes in to give as a present)) and make the marbles "chase each other," until the whole box was covered in paint. And if you stayed full time you took naps and then ate lunch.

You could also:
Have them go back-to-school shopping, someone gets a dog/cat/hamster/whatever pet, make words with letter cookies/gummies, collecting rock or pine cones, maybe put out a bird feeder, they could make up stories together, hm...dance to kid music.
Oh, if these versions of Kibum and Jonghyun can dance well and sing well, maybe they can make a band with the two of them and perform for their parents. That's what I did when I was their age!

If you don't want to do kids anymore, don't force yourself, though. ((But maybe one more chapter with a really final feel to it, y'know? Like maybe Jonghyun would say something like, "But it's life, Kibummie, so I guess its okay," or something. But then I'll cry about it...Ugh, the life of a fan)).

Wonderful chapter, as per usual! I'm so glad I decided to follow this story, I was really close to not doing it. :/ I'm sooooooo glad I did!
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