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Please Verify Your Age [M] Completed!

Trigger Warning
by claymorerosa322
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Tags   eunhae   kyuhyuk   superjunior   crackand   | Report Content | A A A A

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Characters

Super Junior

Description

Le power of lulz has taken over le story and le story iz now made of lulz. But le author iz too lazy to change everything. Basically, everyone screws someone while Donghae is away. 


Foreword

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL


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Donghaelover44 () says about chapter 58:
Idk even know what to say about dumbbell like what the food even a three days old baby is smarter then you. He have the attention span of a goldfinch three seconds that all. Leeteuk being all creepy in other people live is the best you don't get that every day.
LEE DONGHAE GO GET YOURSELF A BRAIN PLEASE A COMPUTER SOFTWARE WORK TOO YOU KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-distressed () says:
I am amused by these comments. BDSM is extreme, guys. No surprise. The author barely did anything else, like edge play or any type of paraphilia.

It got a little repetitive for me, but I like it. :3 Te other comments about it being too extreme/BDSM, fuq them. .3.

coacoa () says about chapter 22:
Its Donghae

natnatfung () says about chapter 57:
New reader just finished ur story here...
Ummmmm as a sadistic and Pervy reader I am, this is some how too much for a reader to handle- like seriously? 50something chapters full of ? I admit that I am craving for bdsm and torturing fics recently, but well to me ur story sounds a bit fantasy and too much bdsm just focused on the same person. Other readers skipp chappie a cuz they think that it is way too much but for me a basically skipped 10chapters because they r too boring and predictable. Maybe If this story is written in a better language and a more realistic plot, as well as maybe having breaks between ___ scenes/ flowing the plot along with some vanilla / break down the story into a few short stories, I would really appreciate it. I have nothing against u on torturing hyukjae coz hell this is not called as a fiction for nothing, dude. Just make ur ___ scenes a bit different from others- don't make all sexy scenes go through the same route. Please kindly ignore my dam typos or grammatical errors in this comment coz I finished the whole story on my iPod and typed this comment in the notes before pasting it back here :3 hope I'll see some improvement in your future BDSM stories.

NikaTheNeko () says about chapter 2:
Oh my poor Hyukiee.... How can u write something like this...?! He doesn't deserve it!!! :(

fluffycloud448 () says about chapter 2:
I agree with xXxkagarouxXX this is truly a ****ed up fic, it made me sad and depressed, if I could vote this fic down I would, :(
I made the mistake of reading a few chapters of another fic from this author, and it sounded just the same as this one, so after reading chap 2 I checked other fics by this author and as suspected there it was the fic I had gladly rejected and abandoned 4 months ago.
I really don't appreciate authors like these whose stories upon reading sound as if they'd been written while high on a generous dose of opium >:"(

chasell () says about chapter 7:
oooo poor kyukkie if i was there o will reap all there heads off i dont like how they treat hyukkie- mumble-animals *sigh

chasell () says about chapter 5:
omg sexy time with yemin wow :()______

chasell () says about chapter 3:
i love leeteuk comments hahaha he is sarcastic i love him <3

chasell () says about chapter 2:
awww i want Kang In to be my first aaaaa soo sweet and btw he is my bias and that i call perrrrfect haha-smirk-

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