Curious: First Love

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vlor99
#1
YASH B2ST FANFICTION!! i totally thought no one writes ablut any b2st members anymore i am so satisfied and happy about this fanfic. I love doo joon and i love wooyoung and i am loving the description haaha okay i will stop whinning right now and i will go read this.
annabloem
#2
Chapter 5: sweat and food is the worst combination xD

heavy drinking is not good ;_;

so typical asking the question back xD no one can ever decide where to go xD
Italian food is good though <3 (except in italy, but that's just me xD)

even though they're siblings it totally feels like a date somehow xD
But Jinwoon ruins the sibling cuteness xD

Jinwoon knows it xD They do look like a couple xD
annabloem
#3
Chapter 3: see, I knew he had to know her!
that could be true as well xD
Yes, I knew it!
haha that's kind of weird really xD Why would he keep the two of you apart if he keeps talking about you?

my life as a student xD Always at home unless doing groceries or going to class xD
He never always you to go out? That's kind of horrible though...
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pov change~

aawww... poor Doojoon.
hahaha a girl version of Wooyoung xD
I'll introduce myself xD That's right, take the initiative!

pov change again~

Why did you lie then, wooyoung? Why? What's wrong with your best friend??
now I really want to know what's wrong with Doojoon >.<;
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Yes, I'm wondering the same thing!

" since you can say I have better music taste than me." Should this be 'than him'??
oooh, a better singer too :3
I get it Wooyoung, driving is difficult xD
that's just a little bit scary, wooyoung

to protect her from WHAT????
annabloem
#4
Chapter 2: woohoo a longer chapter :D
I love the background, so cute!
Okay, on to reading xD

he has to know her! I mean, Wooyoung must have at least mentioned her, right?
oh, that's a smart observation, is he evil? Omg is he like super dangerous secretly?
acting extra nervous always works :3

Aww he's so worried about her!
they're not nagging, they're just worried <3
annabloem
#5
Chapter 1: I'd be curious if he was the only friend I never met. But then again I hardly seen any of my brothers friends xD
She's totally falling for him, right? Already xD

okay I'm gonna be honest here:
I love the concept, but I feel like maybe it would be useful to get a beta-reader? since sometimes I had to read a sentence twice to get it >.<; /don't hate me maybe I'm just stupid
But I really am looking forward to reading the next chapter ^^
YJH_beautiful
#6
Chapter 5: I always love any siblings relationship plots kekeke
YJH_beautiful
#7
Chapter 3: Who is this damn Yoon Doojoon. LOL I need more explanation ㅋㅋㅋ
Rachmi94 #8
Chapter 2: I think my thoughts on the first chapter are wrong, doojoonie is the..... (Secret)
Muahahahah XD