Disconnected

Description

Maybe that’s why we’d never work together in the long run; she’s too fast, too independent, too prideful and too much, all at once. She in giving advice that doesn’t involve drinking or violence, and sometimes she’s too direct, too cold.

Foreword


Hello!
This is basically just some word-vomit kind of thing, mostly inspired by 5SOS - Disconnected, although very very loosely and not really that related to the song.
(I have no idea if I should rate this or not to be honest, but there will be a lot of ual language, cussing and stuff like that so... yeah?)

This will be written in three parts for now.

-MyHeaven

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xhaust
#1
Chapter 3: I Accidentally was brought to this fic and it was awesome! it like you have everything in this 3 chapters! beautifully written ❤️ i just love JETI
Jeti48 #2
Chapter 3: Amazing,,, well written.... I love it.... Really
shimmy020300 #3
Chapter 3: I always ship jeti in a friendly way and taeny was really my main as in im so addicted with them but you make me confused now I love jeti and ship them in a romantic way too somebody help me T_T
redlighton #4
Chapter 3: God, I love this JeTi! I like how I was wrong that Jessica would most likely create the rift on their 'some' relationship bec of her view with commitments and all that, but turned out it was Tiffany who got all confused and in denial and managed to push Jessica away. But in the end, she pulled Jessica back and it was just so precious how they reunited ;_;

Thank you for this! xx
LL2014
#5
Chapter 3: Read through quite a few of your stories (working my way through all of them haha) and I'm never disappointed! This was beautifully written. It projected real life love problems and friendship problems. The boundaries we set and cross but get confused about. Very realistic :D They were clueless but knew what they wanted, at the same time, they didn't. I like how they had a break up; they didn't make up straight away, Tiffany didn't chase the typical way. They took time and mended in a proper way. Honestly, bravo with this fic! So well written with a good and realistic plot line. The characters were developed great too, loved how you wrote Tiffany's way of thinking. Definitely going to read this again :D
escada #6
Chapter 3: Whoaaaaaa~ That was a really nice teenage Jeti story! Loved the happy ending
Justified
#7
Chapter 3: Wow ,this is the best. I'm can feel they love. I'm like Jessica&Tiffany in this one.
Hope you continue writing more about JeTi.
YoonJiSic
#8
Chapter 3: Wow that was so good....most of the time you left speechless...love it
stationrm #9
Chapter 3: My fav phrase would be, the last phrase. ''...and if I'm lucky, she'll come around too''. For me both of them are two weird teens, sometimes they are so random, so clueless, ignorant to each other despite having stronger friendship but other times they dont realise they fit perfectly. Experiments, freedom, friendship are all related to teenagers. Glad they can have all these with their loved ones. One thing, these two are so clueless about each other, I notice, be it Jessica or Tiffany, they ask 'why' too much.

Totally enjoy reading this as my bedtime story lol. Thank youuuu! One shot indeed has its own charm.
sunbyung4eve
#10
Chapter 3: Love this. Very well written, hope to see more jeti fix author.