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after months of struggles, manhwa artist kim kai finally finds inspiration
in form of a young, beautiful coffee shop owner named oh sehun.

 

featuring: kai/sehun, luhan/sehun, bff!chanyeol/kai
pg-13 | romance, light angst, slice of life | 29k+ words

a/n: written for exordium. it's the first time for me to write such a long fic, so it would mean a lot to me if you don't stay silent readers with this project and comment for once. and i don't mean comments that tell me how cute sekai are, or telling me to continue writing, but rather your thoughts about the story/plot. i hope that is not too much to ask for.
also i would like to thank tommo for the title suggestion, ana for her encouragement and willingness to beta this gross thing for me, as well as maknaelinet members who had to endure my random whining in our network chatroom.

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safarisunset #1
Chapter 4: I really really loved the way that you have characterized both Jongin and Sehun in your story! I feel like there is so much of their personalities in here that just makes this story feel so natural and true! Also, how cute would it be for Sehun to own a coffee shop? Thank you for the lovely story!
nurzuwaida #2
this is my fav written by you oh god youre amazing thank you God bless you ;;
Cheekobooie #3
I love thiss... sehun feels so warm that i can almost feel kai being cozy.. i love it.. thank you..
teufelchen_netty #4
Chapter 4: They are sweet and precious : )
I love how you wrote about them
teufelchen_netty #5
Chapter 3: Jongin is a great guy and friend, I like how their relationship grows
teufelchen_netty #6
Chapter 2: This is a really good, interesting and entertaining beginning.
kai's though are all comprehensible
Sherl0ck #7
Chapter 4: I really really enjoyed this story. It felt real as it showed Jongin's worries, struggles and insecurities. I also liked that it wasn't rushed and their relationship grew with time. Your style is pleasant to read and I especially took a liking to Sehun as he was a gentle yet strong character. You asked for criticism too and I'm not trying to be rude, but I noticed a few minor mistakes with negative questions, e.g. "is not it sad...". I'm no specialist in grammar, so I might be wrong, but I think it should be either "is it not sad..." or "isn't it sad...". All in all, it was a good story worth reading.
Wuzzup #8
Chapter 4: This is utterly adorable! I love how it didn't happen quickly, how it spanned over a year and with dumb but realistic Jongin, and Sehun with his patience yet not being overly perfect, well enough to make me squeal anyway LOL.

Basically I just adore how heir relationship was built up, all those details make it a very good read! The characterization of Jongin constantly running from his fears and troubles was really nice. I love how Jongin's parents still didn't accept him when he went back, making it more realistic and relatable.

anyway I'm babbling, and I just needed to tell you how much I liked it ♥
skzexobaby #9
Chapter 4: This is so good! *-* I love it! <3
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