Phantom Crimes [DISCONTINUED]

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Description

Do Kyungsoo is a ghost psychologist from Police Department. He is a special person who can interact with the ghosts, which humans can’t see. Because of him, they solved many crime cases including the hardest ones. Until one day, he and his best friend were threatened by a serial killer. Will Kyungsoo and the others be able to track down the serial killer?


Genre: Crime/Mystery, Drama, Angst
Lenght: Chaptered
Rating: PG-13 (Violence, and character death)
Status: Ongoing

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Foreword

This is my very first EXO fanfiction, so there will be a lot of mistakes and grammars. Also please leave a comment below to review so I could check my mistakes and brain up for more interesting stories! Hope you readers enjoy the story~

 

 


I do not own EXO, cameos from SME and SME itself. Please do not copy or claim this story as yours. Please message me for permission and translations.

 

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Reviews:

"The plot is amazing, even though ghost stories aren't new and slightly over-used. I still find your story different in a lot of things."

ℝookie ℝeviews | A Review Shop: Total score of 102/120 *Hall of fame*

 

"I was scared that you made the plot twist too strong that it’s hard for you to get out of it. However as I continued to read your chapter, I felt like you knew what you are doing and you’re just keeping your reader in the dark."
ʕ ᓀ ᴥ ᓂ ʔ K U M A 2.0: Total score of 88/100

 

"It had the perfect cup of angst, fluff, drama, romance, and thrill, which left me excited for more"
∞ | ∞ Pasta Laces Graphics, Beta, & Review Shop ∞ | ∞: Total score of 87/100

 

"Suspense, action, humour? This piece has got it all, not a romcom romance story but is definately a captivating angst story to be read with a light heart."
¶BACON YEHET SHOP™¶: Total score of 86/100
 

"I like about this story, hence of this genre in general, is that it is so unpredictable that you can never guess what is going to happen next."

A①B②C③ REVIEW SHOP: Total score of 73.5/100

 

"I loved the plot: it was interesting, it was somewhat original (more mass media is focusing on ghosts these days but who knows), it had a couple of twists. Overall good."

⚜NIGHTS OUT all shops⚜: Total score of 71/100

 

"The storyline is intriguing but it's just starting to develop so I'm definitely following this fic."
BLK's Review Shop: Total score of 60/75

 

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passantana #1
Sorry, but i want an ending... thx for your great work!
BlackAshes #2
Chapter 33: It's okay, it's a little let down that we don't get to figure out all the mystery and see how your story ends, but I completely understand and respect your decision. It's not an easy plot and there's no fun in trying to force yourself to finish something when you feel that you can't. And with your busy schedule it's best that you stick with what you can handle and want to do. Good luck with it all.
reddoll123 #3
Chapter 33: Aw, that ...but thanks for telling us, ya know? Wish ya the best and your drawings so far look really cute ^^. I like the mixed-media look to 'em.
hearteu_lips #4
Chapter 33: I think with your current schedules, it's really better for you to only stay with one or twoshots. Good luck in the future.
skzexobaby #5
Chapter 32: Well not gonna lie I feel sad about it because I really like the story but can you do a chapter with all the ideias that you have, some keypoints of the future chapters and of course who is the killer, I think that this way we will know what happened and you wouldnt feel so bad for descontinuing it
Softballgrl13811 #6
Chapter 31: I love this story I really do! You're doing such a fantastic job of weaving such an intricate tale. Thank you and keep up the amazing story telling!
BlackAshes #7
Chapter 31: Oh I really loved this chapter and it so well written. As a throw back to their college years I think it was great how you managed to integrate all of the characters in the same time. We've got Jongin talking with Jongdae, Junmyeon texting Yifan, Jongdae with Minseok and Luhan, all of them mourning for Tao, which is really sad but goes so well with the melancholy of Christmas eve. Because it's during festivities like these that one thinks of family and the close ones we love, and in this case it also means death because of the 'Christmas Killer'.
And we also get to see Yixing as well, who seems to have received a report of a another victim of Reindeer.
It really is a great chapter, I love the tone it's written in. I really enjoyed it because it gives a insight of the dynamics of how things were before Kyungsoo, Jongin, Baekhyun and Chanyeol got involved in the Phantom crimes.
Thanks and Happy Holidays!
hanashira #8
Chapter 30: Omg... this story is beautiful...i love how you potrays all the characters.
BlackAshes #9
Chapter 26: It's great that your love for Exo and Jongin returned. I'll patiently wait for your return in November. Have a safe and fun trip.
#prayforbusan #prayfortheslyfox
AisyahUmaira #10
Chapter 24: NoooOooo..cliffhanger..
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