Chapter 2: THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND INNOCENT AND I LOVE IT! I love the fluff and the friendship! I could actually picture every moment of this and it made my day. I would love to have Lay as my gardian angel. ?

Chapter 2: please please please update :) this is ing cute!!!!

Chapter 2: Cutest story ever xD

Chapter 2: Awww I love how even after he gets teased about it luhan still believes lay is there <3 Thats so sweet that Lay practices how to turn into his human body and how to do human things like talking!! awwww!! The cutest thing is that lay couldnt take luhans sadness anymore and turned into his human form without realising it its so sweet <3 you write lays frustration very well btw! I love the attention to detail with things like lay having never sat down before and how his name comes out funny and he struggles to actually speak properly. i love that 'how could he forget to practice his own name' thats something real life yixing would do >_< "he suddenly felt sympathetic to Luhan's parents who, he remembered, were often confronted by all kinds of questions from their inquisitive son that they didn't know how to answer." LOOL, i laughed so much at that line, luhan's THAT kid >_< Hehehe lays thought process through this whole confrontation is so cute, like how he's so appalled at luhan sitting infront of him so calmy when he thinks he's a vampire >_< lol luhan protecting his modesty when he finds out yixing watches over him >_< lays reaction to that is so sweet, i feel so bad for him he's already struggling to speak so its so hard to defend himself, and then feeling what crying is like and having a lump in your throat, hes so cute!! their meeting is really the sweetest thing!! their personlities differences make this meeting so interesting, theres a million questions a second curious mr luhan and then theres lay who is struggling to even string human sentences together to answer luhan >_< i really really love how much attention you put into all these things lay is feeling and trying for the first time as a human, its so interesting to think all these things we do like sitting, crying, speaking, etc, imagine learning them like he is?

Chapter 2: yay new update *crying in my corner* been waiting for this

Chapter 2: Waaaa, they hugged! Even though I'm sure Lay has no idea what a hug is or means, but they hugged! Ah, good chapter. Made me feel all kinds of things. Thank you for the update~

Chapter 1: I can feel this is going to be one of my favorite stories. Just the idea of Lay being Luhan's Human Guardian makes me excited! I hope you decide to keep the story going, it's really good so far~

Chapter 1: You already caught laylaylay :3

Chapter 1: Update soon.. i love this kind of story..