Train Trip

Description

Jonghyun was on his way home when someone disturbed his peaceful trip.

Foreword

My first fan fiction (that I actually have the courage to put it online). English is my second langauge so there could be grammar mistakes along the way.

Enjoy~

 

-- I do not own the pictures in the banner, credits to the right owners.

Author's Thoughts
fluffyshinee
Changed some grammar things and sentences. I think it's much better to read now tbh ^^
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LovesAsianDrama #1
Chapter 1: You actually have a really good story here. I think it's very cute and sweet.

BUT there are several spelling errors, grammar mistakes. Like for instance, pokey is spelled pocky. When you wrote "made Jonghyun opening his eyes" should have been "made Jonghyun open his eyes" this is one of the sentences. There are several more. I hope I did not offend you our hurt your feelings? As your first story it is good. Again, I enjoyed reading it.
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