Proposal's Failure

The Kiss That Changed Everything

 

Without Jinhee and Donghae's knowledge, Kyuhyun is watching from afar eversince the two started talking.

His eyes widened at what he heard from his hyung's mouth, "Marry me."

 

"MARRY HIM?!" Kyuhyun whisper-shouted.

 

Kyuhyun's POV

THAT ONE CRAZY FISH.

MARRY YOU?! You must be kidding!

You just dated Jinhee, for like, a month ago and, now, you're asking her to marry you?!

Uh-oh. I should take Jinhee away from hyung before she says 'yes'

 

*insert my oh-so-handsome evil smirk here*

 

"A-ah, Jinhee-yah! Your dad's calling.. uhh, you." I lied. Please, work. *cross-fingers*

 

I can see Donghae hyung's disappointment in his eyes and he stared at me with the what-are-you-doing-here-you-moron look. Duh. I gave him my super innocent look. Ha! That's the evil maknae for you, hyung. Jinhee's my girl.

 

"Uh, Donghae, I'll just talk to you later." Jinhee sighed and walked away.

 

Donghae hyung glared at me before he left and I gave him the same look once again. As if I'm scared. -__-"

 

I ran to catch up with Jinhee. "Hey."

"Why is my dad calling me?" She asked.

I cleared my throat, "He..isn't calling you, actually."

 

By the time I finished the line, she stopped walking and looked at me, "What do you mean?"

"He's not looking for you or anything. I..I just wanted to talk to you personally.. I mean, the two of us,, you know.. I.. I'm sorry for interrupting your talk with hyung. I don't know that it's serious."

"How did you know that we're talking about a serious matter?"

O.O

uh-oh. Lie again!

"I.. haha!" I fake-laughed, "I just guessed it.. I'm really genius."

-______________________-

"Oh."

"Yeah, uhmm, c'mon." I grabbed her wrist and took her to the elevator going to SME's rooftop.

 

Seohyun's POV

"Give this to Kyuhyun, will you? Can't find him since morning." Yuri unnie gave me a paper bag. "That's a new game he asked me to buy for him."

I just nodded, "Sure, unnie."

 

Yay :"> 

I will have a chance to see him.

I was about to go outside of our practice room when I saw him walking hand-in-hand with... Jinhee.

 

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heartbreak :(

That moment when you saw the one you love walking hand-in-hand with your bestfriend. IT HURTS.

I sighed and a single tear dripped down my eye.

 

"Seohyun-ah? What's wrong?" Yoona unnie asked me.

I immediately faked a smile and wiped the tear, "Ah..N-nothing. I was actually a-about to go... See you later, unnie!"

 

I ran to the elevator. I want to go to my comfort place. SME's rooftop.

 

Your POV

"Speak now."

 

I told Kyuhyun as soon as we landed our feet on the rooftop's ground.

 

"Jinhee. I know you liked me." He said, confidently.

 

My eyes widened at his statement, "What do you m-mean?"

"You like me. before.. Am I right?"

"W-who told you?" I stuttered. How did he know?!

"Little bird told me." He smirked.

I sighed, "Okay. That was before.."

 

He smiled. The smile that I used to love. I admit, I loved him before. But.. He hurts me. And I love Donghae now.

"I like you too.. Until now." He said, walking towards me.

"K-Kyuhyun..."

"We like each other, as I can see.. So, why don't we start again? I mean, you.. You'll be my girlfriend."

"I have to--"

"Jinhee.. Don't make hyung as a rebound. I know, you still have those feelings you felt towards me. Please, be my girl." He knelt down and opened a rectangular box.

"Will you be my girlfriend?"

 

A bracelet. A beautiful stone-studded bracelet. My jaw dropped, literally...

 

Kidding!

 

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[A/N: The bracelet's picture. Aww, I hope, Donghae will give me that one.. LOL. *dreaming author again*]

 

"I.. I'm--"

"Please, Jinhee?"

 

I'm speechless. 

but I don't want to accept his offer. I mean, duh. I LOVED him, okay? But that's LOVE with a letter 'D'. So, it's past tense. PAST TENSE. LOVED. I don't like him anymore! I love my Donghae.. and kyaaa! He just asked me to marry him earlier, right? :"""> 

 

Anyway...

 

"I'm sorry, Kyuhyun, but I love Donghae." I said and ran away.

 

Seohyun's POV

Ahh. Rooftop's fresh air!

Oh wait, that's Kyuhyun and Jinhee!

 

"Jinhee.. Don't make hyung as a rebound. I know, you still have those feelings you felt towards me. Please, be my girl." Kyuhyun knelt down and opened a rectangular box.

"Will you be my girlfriend?"

 
He told Jinhee. 
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What's happening? 
He loves her? W--why?
 
I cried. I love Kyuhyun eversince I became an ELF. I.. love him too much that it hurts too bad. :'(
 

"I.. I'm--"

"Please, Jinhee?"

 

He asked Jinhee one more time. No. I can't stand to hear what she has to say. I don't want to get hurt.

 

I ran away while crying. It really hurts. T__T

I just hope, Jinhee said 'No'.

:(

 

Kyuhyun's POV

D*mn.

No one ever rejected the almighty Cho Kyuhyun. 

I threw the bracelet in frustration and called Jang Bin ahjumma.

 

"Yoboseyo?"

"The plan didn't work." I said.

"What plan?"

"Aish. The plan to make Jinhee my girl!" I hissed.

"Okay, I have the plan B."

 

She hung up.

Okay. I think, I should wait for her  plan.

 

Donghae's POV

I saw Seohyun running. and.... crying?!

 

"Seohyun-ah!" 

When she saw me, she immediately wiped her tears, "What happened? Why are you crying?"

She just smiled, "Ah, it's nothing. I gotta go, oppa."

She ran away. Weird.

 

I decided to go to the rooftop to relax.

As I got there, I saw a sparkling object near the bench.

"Oh.. what's this?"

 

WOW. A beautiful bracelet! I immediately thought of Jinhee. 

O.O

Did I just propose to her earlier?!

The words I've said just sunk in now.

 

Oh, nevermind. I'll just give this beautiful bracelet to MY BEAUTIFUL PRINCESS :">

 

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LOOOOL. HELLO! :D

Did someone miss me?? hahaha. I missed you all!

 

Anyway, I want looooong comments for this one, okay? Please? Cause long comments are more touching to read than those short ones. :">

 

I'll just answer your comments individually. AFF's got a new feature. LOL. The individual comment replies. gotta try that one. XD

 

Bonus pictures of Jinhee for you! <3

 

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She's so beautiful, isn't it? :')

 

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hye_gyu #1
Chapter 4: hi *wave new reader here ^^ like ur story, kyuhyun is not appear yet, but if she is founder of the most famous anti-SuJu
site in the world how come she did not know donghae and eunhyuk? kekeke poor hyukie
superELFgirl #2
Chapter 49: hello! new reader here~~ i LOVE your story!!! kyaaa~~~ kyuhyun is so evil! but whht do we expect he's known as the evil maknae for nothing hahahah still i'll go with Donghae!!!! update update~~~
bubbletea410 #3
Chapter 49: wait is Lee Jin hee REALLY lee soo man's daughter?
is she really a model?
LostInTrack
#4
Chapter 49: Hi! I love your story! Please update! Oh and one more thing.. Is Jinhee a real girl or you just took some pics in the net??? Update soon! Love your stories!!! :)
APOBAN6PO13
#5
Chapter 49: UPDATE SOON. *^*
fishyHaexxx
#6
Chapter 49: oh Kyuhyun is sooooooooo evil!!!! JinHee please say YES!!!!!

update soon unnie^^
anggita #7
Im new reader and i saw ur ff! I love it please update soon !
AllRiseGold
#8
Just.... say yeeeeeeeeeeeessss !
Oh baby give it to me right now xDD hahahaha
I LOVE YOUR STORY AUTHOR~NIM !! ^^

WAAAA UPDATE SOON!! FIGHTING <3

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Lee_Jaerin
#9
OMONAAAA!! JINHEE SAY YES PLEASE??!! // CRIES //

I HATE THAT JANG BIN SERIOUSLY!! WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER?!! SHE'S THE ONE WHO SHOULD DIE ! ANNOYING BIATCH [ LOL ]
OMFG!! AAARRRGGHHH!!AND WHY DID SHE CALL KYUHYUN?? DON'T TELL ME THAT THOSE WILL COMBINED OR SOMETHING TOGETHER x[!! WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH

I SHIP JINHEE AND DONGHAE.. OmO this is my first time not to ship with my EvilKyu x) but seriously I'm telling the truth.. I want Hae here ^^


Anyways, I'm your new reader and New Subscriber Author-nim

<3
Hope you Update soon ^-^