Hunting Season

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Description

Kris Has Always Had A Thing For Tao The Adorable Chinese Exchange Student Who Kinda Resemebles A Panda But He's Never Had The Guts To Say Anything To The Latter But That's All Going To Change Very Soon

Foreword

Chaptered Stories

Smiley (BTS)

One Shots

Alone (Xiuchen) - Bully (Kaisoo) - Christmas Day (Hunhan) - Deep End (Sulay) - Hunting Season (Taoris) - Ice Cream (Baekyeol)

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Lemonny_chan
#1
Chapter 1: Wow update pls..
gogo_galaxygirl
#2
Chapter 1: I think this would have been a really brilliant chaptered fic. I like that Kris mentions that his cool guy act is a persona. I just feel like there's not really an ending. A cliffhanger is one thing, but I feel like I have to make up my own ending and that sort of defeats the purpose of a fanfic. As far as the technical writing goes, you said "my best friend" a lot. Try using different pronouns like "she," "the girl," or something like that. And when you end dialogue, you should put a comma in when you have narrative text after it. Honestly, I don't love it, but it and you have a lot of potential to be really great.

Good luck! :)
- Kris
Sweet_love_Exo_ships
#3
I really want to read it ! Update when you can !