Very very good! I really love it!!! <3

Chapter 7: i almost protest wholeheartedly when reading the early paragraph, especially when i reach: "...when DongWoon rejected his happy hug with an unbelievible stare after so long time without seeing him, KiKwang finally had his breakdown. He had enough of this kind of situation..." WTH, don't break them pleaseee... i almost wailing throughout that paragraph LOL

then goes this lines: "...and honestly that was killing him to say something that he knew, would hurt DongWoon and lead their relationship to a critic point" not only killing you Kiki! but it kills the readers as well >.<
and dongwoonie is hurt too, everyone maybe... the members too...
why did you make kiki and woonie suffering author sshi? *bring banner and shout protest* kekekeke.......

dongnipongni then appear: "He wanted something that would mean a lot, something that would be seen by almost everybody..." i sigh in relieve... yes! good boy! go ahead!

here you go his trademark! his b'day tweet for his kiki! cuteness overload! not only the abundance sweetness that can make diabetes LOL
but his cheesiness, aigoo~ wotta lovely maknae (hearteu) kekekeke...
and apparently the cheesiness is contagious tho, kiki's reply is so shocking! he seems like only care about the love you part, not in the b'day wishes, he is in cloud nine LOL

then it is ended beautifully, the apartment scene *wink wink* kekeke~ , oh my fingers type this "ended" word reluctantly *sobbing inside*
why good things always has an end??? but it has to right? a good story have to has a good ending. You make the last story that playfully killing me author shhiii.... but it is a good sign tho. it means that you DO improve much in writing. gonna say goodbye to this story is really hard for me, but i'm anticipating your next stories. i wish it has some kiwoon in it kekeke...
i believe the next stories will be as good as this, or maybe even much more beautifully written than this?

well, i will always support you.. thank you. bye~yeom ^^

Chapter 6: asdfghjkl when did you write thsi story author sshi??? you are so fast! daebak! >///<

this! this picture is sooooooo meaningful! this is the only pict of them that i find through editing process? black and white or sephia mode or whatever the name, cause i aint good at photograpy, mian...

heol... thats really something... and this story has different vibe than those before, while the previous chapters are more likely fluffy, this chappie kinda gimme lil sting on my poor heart, aigoo~
i can feel Kiki's sadness through your story author sshi~
you portray Woonie well, he likes to joke around like usual and yet know he crosses his line, napeun Woonie *sob*
Kiki is hurt by your "playfulness", poor Kiki, poor the bride kekeke...

i love it author sshi~ i really really like it, now you even write wider range of genre, not only fluffy but lil bit angst??? hurm... maybe it cannot be categorized as angst yet, but i can feel Kiki more :(

but thats good, naiseu - nice! more emotion in it! day by day obviously you improve your writing. more new diction too :D
i love to see a writer like you, willing to learn and always down to earth, kind to the readers ^^
good luck author sshi~
realizing this is the last of their pict of them in a frame posted by them, seems like this story will temporary stopped until this chapter right? hiks hiks... so sad :'(
i wish that they make a new moment, not only DooSeob who day by day seems closer kekeke...
i wish that tomorrow we will get new cute photo of them in Japan Fansmeeting that the theme is about school. cannot wait the fancam ^^

Chapter 5: you know the boys so well author sshi~ '“Do you think I'm good-looking?” KiKwang asked.' this is really Kiki's insecurity! like what he had been said in "Beast Showtime" and other shows >.<

“You're too good with words, Woonie,”~ and uri dongni pongi is a good boy is always, and a sweet talker, cheesy, has alot of sappy words and his goofy smile and other trademark that we love *melting with is cheesiness* kekekeke and his handsomeness *spazzing alot*
the point is you portray the boys amazingly!!! good job! like what they'd been say asdfghjkl, why they are so cute when they have convo???

'“Only for you, Woonie,” he whispered next to his ear before snuggling more against his boyfriend.'
wuuut wuuut wuuut??? what??!! this! i sopt their cheesiness there kekekke~ aigoo~ so cute @_@~~~

thanks to you author sshi~ and you know what author shi? i feel like that day by day you write your story more lively than before. you improve so much. now their characters are more playful, we as the reader get more playfulness from the characters we read.
it seems like, the more you write the better you are. Great! ^^

then the saying of: "practice is the best teacher" is indeed true then, keep the amazing work author shhi~ , write more, read more and never stop to learn~ i will support you! Fighting! Bye-yeom ^^

Chapter 4: Aaaaaargh! there is no notification on my account ㅠㅠ
So I late to know that there is this update. Im so sorry for not realize it soon author ssi ㅠㅠ

THIS! I do love this picture >.<
And when i read Sakura things, then my mind screaming happily that you decide to write about this pict ♥♥♥♥♥♥
You know what? Now I expect much from you. To make a story behind their twitter picture :3
Im so sorry for my greediness ㅠㅠ
I just cannot help myself from being overjoy everytime you have ideas to write ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Thank you much author sshi.... and HAPPY B'DAY!!!

Chapter 3: aaaaw :3
As alwayas they are sooooo~ cute! >.<
This story is kinda fluffy one ♥
Added by extra chessy lines that represent their daily life, im excited to see that you indeed found those tweets and turn it into story ^^
whats on your sleeves author ssi? How many amunition you have and you keep it under your sleeves? How many times you will appear to surprise your readers by your research and finding of dongni and kiki's interaction on SNS? >.<
i guess that ive to wait patiently for your next story then~ ^^

Chapter 2: wow! You did the research well and thoroughly! Daebak!
I ♥ kiwoon but i dont even know that there is this conversation on their twitter. Im really curious now, it seems like you found a lot of their conversation and my biggest question is how could you find those tweets that belong to last year?
At first i am so surprised, then as usual, they are so cute :3
Kiki as always being an adorable girlfriend *oops.... boyfriend* to DongniPongni

Chapter 1: aaaaw... so cute :3
How Kiki finally being together with his Dongni Pongni.
The picture shows that Kiki's expression is so much tender and care to Woonie.
It is cute that they secretly into each other but too shy to admit that.
Thank you so much for makin cute story for the cute couple, i wish that this story has continuation, since they have plenty of moment together (even though obviously not as much as our dooseob) ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Well, good job author ssi~
And thank you soooooo much, it means a lot to me ^^