Blood Sister

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Eight years after the fateful events during which three of South Korea’s biggest crime syndicates were taken down when ex-convict Xiumin betrayed his blood brother for a normal civilian life, Luhan has broken out of jail and he’s on his way to disrupt Minseok and Semi’s peaceful life.  To make matters worse, an incredibly important mission of Kai's has gone wrong in China, meaning that the sole remaining member of Luhan's arch-nemesis Mighty Mouth is back on the scene to hunt down Luhan’s little sister, and he’s convinced that Minseok and Semi know where she is.

Foreword

This is the sequel to The Blood Brother Code.  While you'll probably still be able to read and enjoy and understand most of Blood Sister without having read TBBC (which is a bit of a different genre, to be honest), enjoyment and understanding will probably be increased if you have read the first installment.  If you can't be bothered to read TBBC (since it's almost a hundred chapters long) or don't want to (because I know that psychological mind games aren't everybody's thing, whereas this basically has none and is much more along the lines of action/adventure), here is a synopsis of the plot that tells you everything you need to know.  There is also a spin-off about Jongin called Blood Bound, which can be read as a standalone.

The Blood Brother CodeBlood Bound

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Also, there will probably be character death, most likely action, and a bit of violence, but I'll do my best to make sure it isn't graphic.  There shouldn't be anything in here that needs rating.

 

Not all the characters from TBBC will be appearing, but I'm bringing back as many as I can.  You can expect Agent Kai, super-smart Lay, sidekick Jongdae, Luhan, Sehun and Xiumin for definite, most likely Kyungsoo as well.  There will probably be a lot more action than there was in TBBC.  Tags will be updated as I go along.

 

As usual, I don't own EXO, their image, anything branded to them or SM Ent etc. or to any other artists whose names are used in this story.  The story itself is fictional.  Please don't plagiarise it.  Also, please don't nag me for updates (or tell me to "update soon!") or call me "authornim".  I wish to go by "Korey" on here, and updates will come when they come and not before.  (Side note: I don't allow any translations of any of my works.  Any translations are therefore plagiarism.  The only place you can read Blood Siste is on here, and in English.  If you spot it elsewhere, please let me know.)

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FEATURED: FRIDAY 1st May 2015.

Wow.  This is... er, actually a little scary, considering that Blood Sister has only been on the site for ten days, and only posted for about seven of those because I had it drafted for a little.  It's exactly six months since TBBC got featured (on a Friday as the months changed, too – such deja vu! – and honestly, I'm not totally sure how to handle how highly some of you seem to think of my writing skills.  It's making me really emotional.  I'm far from the best author out there.  But thank you.  Thank you so much.  I'll do my level best to deliver something of the highest quality I'm capable of.

So, with TBBC, I went through and looked at the number of Xiumin-related stories that had been featured.  When TBBC was featured, there were 4600 fanfics under the Xiumin tag, and it was the first Xiumin/OC fic to be featured, out of four featured stories on that tag.  Blood Sister is the seventh on the Xiumin tag, and there are now nearly 5300 fanfics there.  Xiumin's on the rise, ha ha!  TBBC and Blood Sister are still the only Xiumin/OC ones, which makes me weirdly proud.


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MAJOR SPOILERS IN THE COMMENTS SECTION.  READ AT OWN RISK.  PREFERABLY DON'T READ THEM.


 

Korekrypta
24/04/16 The chapters I wrote for the 20th didn't fit right and I wanted to give you decent ones, so I'm currently redoing them. Sorry for the wait :/

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elfishy2002 0 points #1
Chapter 56: The 'spoiler-ed' chap is here, it's coming, isn't it? Lu Weiyi where are youuuuuuuu? ;-;

I wonder whether this is actually an intended scenario or just a not-so-pleasant bundles of pleasant disaster... ;-;
elfishy2002 #2
Chapter 31: Well, things got real bad real fast after Jaera and Luhan make peace... Let's just hope that Kai and Kyungsoo are doing alright. And what will be the fate of the 64 GB memory stick ;-;

Oh, and Korey, you did mention something about helping to find typos- I was wondering if I spotted the right thing - but you might want to give 'a suddenly squelch' and 'snuggled into his site' from the chapter above a peek... Sorry if I end up spotting the wrong thing, tho. You're free to delete the comment, by the way. My eyes and brain just didn't compute nicely at times, so it's more than possible that I'm making a mistake :'DD
elfishy2002 #3
Chapter 17: Goodness, their kids are just plain awesome. Both of them. Like what has been mentioned, Jaera will pull The Invincible's toddler role nicely and I really like how Jaehwan views his dad as a sap at certain times XDD
elfishy2002 #4
Chapter 5: Oh, oh! I see Crime Scene mentioned up there! Naw, I feel like rewatching the show all over again! Xiumin popped out for- uh, thrice in Season 2? :DD

And... Well, no kidding, I almost cuss out loud when I see the despicable name up there ;-; Weiyi hang in there pleaseeeeeeeeeee
elfishy2002 #5
Chapter 2: I've been mulling over it for few minutes before I finally realized that the Taeyong lad is the neighbor's kid from TBBC. Gosh, I seriously love my lovely slow-responding and forgetful brain :))
elfishy2002 #6
I should have listened when I read that comments would mean spoilers sometimes
*sobs* Time machine, anyone? Pretty pleasy please? ;-;

'Kay, nevermind that- let's just get the spoilered (is that even a word?) chap done with! Anyone who's planning to scroll down the comments- I advise you not to unless you actually enjoy big (real BIG) spoiler :'))
Ikifahmy
#7
Chapter 58: Never fails to make me cry....thx for writing this fic
bbsooyo
#8
Chapter 32: This is like the best chapter ever??? LMAO I died laughing because Jaera is so damn cute I'm in love <3
OrangeBright
#9
Chapter 61: I did it againnn. I cant have enough of it...
cessyliciousa #10
Chapter 33: and I think I will cry when that time comes(scroll down). The kids are starting to get attched to Luhan and I think I am too. I guess awkward adault x kids = adorablesss