The Great Pretender

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"Hurt me while you still can. But I'm sure that I'll win this game." 

Vaniel High, a place where elite students are in. Meet their troublemakers but the walking epitome of perfections, namely, Kim Jongin, Kim Myungsoo, and Lee Taemin. Well-known as the typical heartbreaker of Vaniel High. Those three always get to each other's nerves. But when this new transferee 'nerd' came, they made a deal: to make her fall inlove. And whoever wins from this game, will have the title of the most 'precious' award for every guys: Prince Vaniel. 

Little did they know that this nerd had her feisty little secret. But what could that be?

All have their names to take care of. A deal made between the trios. A battle of love, affection, hurt, friendship, trust, pride, and dignity. Who will be the great pretender?

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Foreword


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Starring:

Jung Soojung 

 

Choi Jinri 

 

Kim Jongin 

 

Lee Taemin 

 

Kim Myungsoo 

 

Kang Min Hyuk

 

 

"I was hurt many times, but I didn't thought that I would be fooled by the persons I love." 

"Everyone deserves a second chance. But in my case, I don't deserve it."

"It's over. Game over. Done. I failed."

"Too blinded by the title. This is what I got." 

"I don't deserve anyone. It's just that I'm too heartless." 

"I told you to leave her alone. I've warned you all. But what did you all do? You chose the wrong path." 

"It's not hard to love her, though. It's hard to unlove her."

"I'm here. All alone. What do you think? Do I deserve it?"

"Run. Run away from me. I'll let you go, for the sake of your happiness."

"I'll sacrifice everything. Just. For You."

"I can't. I just can't. You'll end up being hurt." 

"You know what? You're the foolest of them all!" 

"Risk it all, huh? It's too risky but I risked it all." 

"Unnotice me. Let's pretend like nothing happened."

"Let me heal your wounds, it's the least thing I can do." 

"It's a game. Now choose. Love or friendship?" 


Hi there guys! Well, I think this one's an angst. Sorry for the wrong grammars, English is not my mother tongue. 

I'll try my best to improve my writings. So what do you think about this one? I think I'll be posting the first chapter few days from now. It depends.

Ciao!

p.s. so i decided to add minhyuk here. 

pictures, gifs, credits to the owners!

 

Credits to Byong Shop for the cover!

 

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nicoleaudrie #1
Chapter 7: Pleeeaaasssseeee uppddaattee ssooonnn!!!!!!
kkrystals #2
Chapter 7: waaaaaahh, this mystery is killing me and i'm dying to know the truth - who's hands was kai referring to!?!?!? D:
KateChance #3
Chapter 7: Kaistalll!! Update soon please authornimTT dun stop it again
dhedho
#4
Chapter 7: Yes for kaistal  (o^^)o
Please jongin , don't break soojung heart .. she already considered him a kind and caring person.. don't ruin it.. leave that bet ::>_<::
Btw thanks for update authornim.. (^_^)
Caramel_lover369 #5
Chapter 6: Pls. Update soon,love your story btw
Cheers,Margaux.
kkrystals #6
Chapter 6: so soojung is like this.. because of the death of her oppa? mhm, it's still a mystery and we'll have to just find out more information i guess, but i think 'krystal' must be someone pretty popular/important (mythical playgirl after all) and that's why she's in a disguise. also, myungsoo's instinct is spot on! he knows his stuff. :D wow kai, pretending it's all for the bet, are you? can't wait to see these guys battle it out haha
kkrystals #7
Chapter 5: YESSSS FOR MYUNGSTAL!! :') myungsoo acts cold and says he doesn't care, but i'm sure inside he's capable of caring - he just needs someone who's worth seeing that side, like soojung :') i'm still confused about the krystal jung/disguise thing, but it seems quite interesting and i can't wait until everything is revealed, especially when the guys find out that soojung is actually quite attractive underneath her baggy clothes and 'nerd' appearance
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