I never break my promises

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"Please, don't leave" Tao said, tears falling down on his face. Kris looked at him and stopped packing. He sighed. "I'm sorry Tao, but I have to do this. I don't belong here anymore" Kris said.

Foreword

Sooo.... This is my first story. And my first story in English. It's Taoris bc Taoris is my OTP. But yeah... I really hope you will like it.

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bloodymary_ #1
Chapter 1: ooh darling it was very very good(c;) and i liked it.. but i can see that you didn't spend that much time writing it. and i'm so proud of you because you wrote something here.

ps. me and "pro" engrish :((
Spookje #2
Chapter 1: It's really, really fast paced yea :P I couldn't quite get into the story because of it, I think you could have made it way more emotional and dramatic if you took more time to write it. Nonetheless, for a first story it looks promising!

I followed you, I'm interested how you'll develop your stories :) Cheers!
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