No Fooling Around, okay? ...okay Mom m(-.-)m
by aznawzmao
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donghae
eunhyuk
romance
ryeowook
shindong
superjunior
yesung
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“Is she the girl who came to our house today?” Mom asked.
“Yes Mom.”
“So tell me, how is this trip going to work out?”
“Well, we’re going to drive-“
“Drive?!?! Kim Jongwoon, do you expect me to forget you were in a car accident two months ago that nearly cost your life?”
“Mother,” I interrupted in return. “We’re getting a ride from Karen’s parents to the train station, then board a train.”
Mom gave a breath of relief as I continued. “Some people are going to pick us up and bring us to our hotel. She’s going to do her gig, and then we’re coming straight back.”
“Sounds good to me as long as you promise to not get in trouble and come straight back.”
“Promise.”
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GAHHH WHY ARE THE CHAPTERS SO SHORT!!!
BTW who has liked my chapter titles so far? XD
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Moony_Kat on says about chapter 57:
*claps claps* This felt like watching a movie. For real. And I really loved the way you portrayed Yesung here. Good job!
As for the ending, you could have blend in the two last chapters. Trust me, they make more sense together than apart^^
Moony_Kat on says about chapter 17:
*giggles* 'Brother Satan' *giggles* I like this God of yours!
Moony_Kat on says about chapter 3:
WHAT?! NO! Why you awful person TT.TT
Moony_Kat on says about chapter 1:
LOL God's being hilarious in this chapter ^o^
leejinkioppa on says about chapter 57:
"Yesung is still alive..."
LOOL you make it sound like it was your goal to kill everyone! XD
leejinkioppa on says about chapter 57:
Yes! I like the second ending more c: it's very touching <3 :) as usual your stories are always touching though o.o
leejinkioppa on says about chapter 33:
Ommgee first kiss kyaa how cute *-* i think these type of guys only exist in fanfics T-T (exaggeration)
leejinkioppa on says:
OHMYGOD I JUST REALIZED. FALLING HURTS AND FALLING IN LOVE HURTS XD OHMYGOD! BUT I SWEAR I DID NOT COPY IT XD LOLOLOL I REALLY JUST REALIZED PUHAHAHAHA but like seriouslyly ._. i didn't even realize until after i saw your comment and came on your story right now XD I have like 165 subscriptions so i didnt even know. i feel so awkward now ><
leejinkioppa on says about chapter 3:
I wanted to read more of your stories and I found some time to~!! :D anyway just like before SO FAR ITS FLIPPING AMAZING. But OHMYGOD you killed shindong and donghae. I swear my heart felt like it just stopped. I was so suddenly scared >___<
Ms3mil33 on says:
loved this story!! it was sooo beautiful!
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