Chapter 4: well , there're tears in my eyes and ughhhhhhhh EVERYTHING WAS GOING JUST FINE AND-
I don't think I breathe throughout the whole third chapter, I was so ing scared omfg, that was a wild ride and omfggggggggggggggggggg i cant stop being sad why WOULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS it's amazing orz ughhhhhhh
this is amazingly sad and wow, it was amazing you're amazing DAMn my heart still hurts OTL
thanks for sharing this with us
Chapter 3: Ugghhhhh I can't even begin to explain how ed I feel after that. Like... dude, I came out to gave a good time and I honestly feel so attacked right now. Lmao, im kidding, but that was seriously heartbreaking, so I mean congrats, if that was what you were going for
Chapter 4: well, wow!! i'm never fond of sad endings but you wrote this amazingly that i actually loved it. Even if it was angsty.
I really liked it how taemin's and key's relationship worked. they are cute~ ( though, i feel sour that they had to die -_- )
and jinki...
anyway, good job^^
Chapter 3: Amazing ending <3 I am a er for angsty endings, but just a little part of me wishes for them to get out of there peacefully. Why was Jonghyun so aggressive as a vampire?
Chapter 3: what??? why do you keep killing people in your fics ??? well yeah it's a horror fic so it's understandible but still .....and you just had to kill both of them agh.
but i still like it the story was very interesting and i liked that you left the whol jonghyun-monster thing unexplained.
i hope you start a new fic soon but please try to make it a bit less angsty and without killing any of your characters >_< bye and God bless <3<3
Chapter 3: Wait, what?! Not our TaeKey!!!! Please please say you have alternate ending in mind (Jjong can still go away but not our babies) please?!?!?!
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