Diamonds - just foolish in love

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You know what, Kyu?

It'll come. The day when our hidden potential will be noticed, just wait and see.

I'm hopeful it'll soon come to us, knocking at our door and we will be ready to run towards it, accepting our fate, shaping it with our bare hands to reach our dreams. I'm sure of it, because no one is perfect at the beginning, no one is happy right away, but everyone can be with a bit of struggles, lots of patience and a disposition to hard work.

Take diamonds for example.

They're one of the most precious gems in the world, but they don't come in the shape we are used to see right from their natural source. They're just common stones, when dug from the mines, and they look extremely like glass. Only through a long process, the thorough work of patient craftsmen, whose lives are devoted to their job, diamonds are cut, cleaned and polished to reach the extraordinary brilliancy they're known for. That's when they increase in value.

We are like two rough diamonds, waiting to be polished and show the world the shining light hidden in the depths of our hearts.

When that will happen, people will be forced to look at us and never ignore the struggles we went through to come into the world, beautiful, bright and sparkling, absolutely not frightened of circumstances, because we can count on each other, on our dreams, on our love.

You're my diamond, Kyu: rough and grumpy. 

Even if now nothing seems to go the way you'd like to, soon you'll realize that my words were true. In the meanwhile, let's lean onto each other and bathe in the light that wraps us all. No matter what, we'll stick together, until the very end...

...because we are diamonds, and nobody turns their back to those who are worth the game.

Foreword

Foreword: I don't know exactly what kind of result I wanted to achieve with this, okay? 

I just woke up one day (it's actually last week) and felt really, really angsty. Do you know when you're attacked by that heavy kind of boredom and you just sit in place and don't know what to do the whole length of the day? Well, that's more or less what happened to me, and that's what pushed me to write an initial draft for this oneshot (which is my first ever completed oneshot - the others always start like one and end up being a chaptered ff...okay, umpf - )

This doesn't really have a plot, well it does for certain aspects, I needed something to use as an excuse for the final turnover, but really...in the end it has got very little sense.

I'm not expecting you to like it, comment it or upvote it, I just wanted to leave it somewhere as an accomplished little work done in between my other million chapters not yet published and/or listed. I gotta admit that I teared a little, while writing it down, but maybe it's just because I was very upset that day and had to figure out which kind of strong emotion I had all bottled up within myself.

I guess that's all for now hahaha Yeah, just wanting to say that perhaps this is more abstract that what it looks like, probably a messy flow of words, hoping to create the illusion of a good work. The end is up to you. xxx

 

Disclaimer: I don't own anything but the plot, which is a fictional work of fantasy.

 

PS: I'll be back to upload the following two chapters of "All's Well What Ends Well" by the end of next week, so, if you're still interested in it, keep an eye over there and let me know your opinions by leaving a comment, which is always appreciated ^-^

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Hanzo242 #1
Chapter 1: This is... Just wow. Amazing abundance of feelings crafted in this and the themes just flow together so well. Its interesting that only Ryeowook's name is mentioned, as if he is the main character and Kyuhyun is his guardian angel. Typical (not really) plot line but a totally mind-blowing writing style. Haha it makes me want to study the entire story and analyze it. If you posted a breakdown of it, I would definitely memorise it. Btw, is it possible for a sequel to happen? It would be nice to see things from Ryeowook's POV ^^
AlyciaC #2
Chapter 1: Ow. Mind blowing! So beautiful and full of sadness too...
mirrormirrora
#3
You wrote this so beautifully, really. I felt both kyuhyun and ryeowook raw emotions and I had so many different kinds of expression when I read this from when they were falling in love to what they became in the end. I understand completely the feeling of sudden angst when your so bored to death too lol it happens to me a lot too but I really think you managed to come up with something so perfect with the feeling. I myself cant do that haha when im feeling angst all i wanna do is sleep. Hahaha. Anyway it was so well written and I can even feel the sincerity between the lines, the way you write is like the previous comment said, truly magical. Thank you for writing and sharing this with the kyuwok community :)