Chapter 1: If I had balls, it would have been blue a long time ago. Lol aaaahhh I loved how you've portrayed top here!! So mature though struggling to get chaerin's attention. And if they're truly dating, I think it'll be like this!!! Cuz I think chaerin likes matured men. And TOP's simply that. Fckkk yeah. Thanks so much for giving me a healthy dose of skytempo!!!!! I loved it allllll. So refreshing. Can't wait to read a chaptered fic from you! <3

Chapter 1: I really love how you write Chaerin. <3 so wonderful and admirable

Chapter 1: i love this so much. especially:

"I love you," she whispers, tearing pooling in her molten chocolate eyes at the possibilities of a break up to come. "More than anything or anyone else in this world combined. You know that if the same were to happen to you, I'd be doing all this for you, too. So please don't make me choose...because it'll be Bom right now. She needs me and I can't ignore that."
And slowly, he removes her hands from his shirt and musters a feeble smile that looks anything but what he intended, "Go on, then. I understand."

and

"Are you still mad at me?" she questions, knowing that he most likely is.
"Yes."
"Of course you are," she mumbles, eyes fluttering shut as her earlier guilt comes back. She captures his hand from her hair and brings it to her lips, pressing a tender kiss there. "I'm sorry."
"You shouldn't be stressing yourself out like this over things that you can't control," he advises wisely, hoping she'd heed his words. "Let the cards fall where they may, Chaerin. You can't control everything."

Chapter 1: love it...

Chapter 1: i liiiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkeeeeee it !!!
Simply but good . I like when chae put her head on seung lap , and the 'come here' part mean she forgiven ..