The Deathbringer

Description

Suho is the destined deathbringer~
Yonghwa is a gurdian angel 

This story is dark with a lot of death. The main character is not a good guy and will express terrible things.

I'm sorry if I offend someone with my writing, it's not my intent.

Chapter Three includes suicide

Foreword

My name is Suho. I was a mortal just like you once. My life wasn't perfect, I wasn't happy, or maybe I was. I don't really know what happiness is, but if the mortal me was happy it isn't at all as amazing as they desribe it to be.
It wasn't a perfect life but I enjoyed it. That is until the day destiny knocked on my door.

"You are the Deathbringer."
Those few words, those ridicilous words changed me forever.

I am the Deathbringer.
I steal your soul from your dead body. I pull it out with force, I bring you immense pain.
Your soul will be trapped inside of me, me who is nothing but an empty shell, filled with tortured souls.

I have been to heaven many times, hell even more. That's where I leave your tourmented soul filled with agony. They say heaven is paradise. But how can you ever experience paradise once I'm done with you?

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doloblue #1
Chapter 4: Hi. I wanted to drop a comment. I like your story its nice. Can i suggest you to make a different point of View? Like in third person. Like a narrator point of view. It would be nice too I think.
Your characters are really interesting and your story is very original and unique.