Forsaken Dreamscape

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Description

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ He awakes with no recollection of who he is and where he is. But he discovers one thing, his nightmares are real.

Foreword

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ His arms lay limp on his side as he sat on a poor old stool in the corner of the room, away from the metal barred windows—set on top where could not reach even if he outstretches his neck—his mouth tightly shut as his eyes stare at the lonely bars that kept him in. His throat tightens when a bird chirps from the outside—he imagined where he was. In an old gray bricked building just a little far off from the coast where tall trees are—where the birds happily chirp, mocking him in his distress. He closes his eyes, envisioning what he had imagined. Everything was black for a while, as he had expected. Then he slowly threw in an old gray bricked building, from the one he’d seen in a movie then the coast from another movie he’d seen a long time ago—maybe he was eight or probably even three—he doesn’t remember.

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ But his thoughts about the outside world doesn't last long—it quickly swirls—colours are mixing. From blues to reds to greys and greens, it just mixes like a mixture from a cake. It is quiet for a while—something he wished always happened. Then from watching everything swirl, a hand reaches out from it, shocking him and making him try to open his eyes—but…

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ He couldn't.

 

 

Entry for Karma's Third Writing Contest. For more information, click here.

 

Poster by -kwons from We Got Fired.

(Just to set the theme. I've been listening to these songs while writing this story.)

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The prequel to this story is available here: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1337392

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 14: there's an author's note chapter looking at the comment and i would die to know what was there TvT
mystery/ thriller is seriously scarce in this community it's sad OTL
Iceprincess610 #2
Chapter 14: wot the heck
yeongie96
#3
Chapter 14: Heol this is so ertly psycho it's sooo damn good!
feelingkimchi
#4
I want to read this (i love psych fics so much) but it says horror in the tags. :(((( is it really scary?
feversend1112 #5
Chapter 15: OMG! I just found your story few days ago and BANG!

I love it!
I love everything in this story!

Gosh, I do in love with psychology and stuffs.

You're the best!

love from Indonesian reader
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 14: I loved how deep Taehyung's character was! Despite what he did, we kind of can sympathize with him, and I actually feel really sorry for him... I got reminded of Kill Me Heal Me a bit (not sure if you've watched it)... really great story! :)
openminds #7
Love that this was posted on my wall!
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 15: Man, I'm always looking for some good psychological reads, and I must say, this was a nice treat I stumbled across.
The A/N here in fact helped me understand and put together a lot of loose ends! So thank you for taking the time to explain all those hidden, otherwise vague details :)
I very much enjoyed the scenarios V was in. Wow, it must have taken a lot of creativity from you, but the hard work was seriously worth it. I could imagine everything with incredibly vividness, and was super surprised to find out they all had some connection with his murdered family members at the end! Not sure if this was intended, but I can finally see the purpose of the siren, which was most likely the form his mother took in his dream-like state. The axe-killing, I can see as his sister. And the hanging form that make an appearance somewhere in the early chapters makes for an interesting father figure! Never would have imagined these things at all until reaching the end, waaah ; v ;

All in all though, really, really good job writing this fan fiction. Stephan King is one heck of an inspiration, haha, so well done! One thing I've been constantly reminded of while reading this as well is the video game 'The Evil Within', which is also a heavy psychological-based storyline and plot. :) But otherwise, this was very innovative.
hellomylova
#9
Chapter 1: Hey, just started reading. It's interesting!