I'll walk *revised*

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Who knew that one of the biggest nights of his little sister's life could mark a turning point in his life? On the night of her wedding Jinki and Minho get in a very serious car accident after an argument broke out in the car. One of the happiest days turned to panic and fear, and in the end changing both their lives forever.

Foreword

So yes, hello there. Now this might sound familiar because I wrote the original here 

however aftering reading it again I found a lot of things I'm not very proud of. I would like to believe that I've grown as a person and as a writer, especially for the fandom, so this is my revise of that original story. You'll notice from the first chapter it's very different from the first, so if you haven't read that I don't recommend you doing so until you've read this one or choose not to all together that's up to you

but yes here

and I'm really proud of this so far ^-^

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kimchlee #1
Chapter 4: kibum is such a husband material here sobs i wanna cryyyyy with his gentle and manlyness ;;~~;; <33
onho here is so stubborn and tempered with emotion when it's come to opinion.. ;;; whale their opinion is always opposite make them had an argue here and there ;;;;
can't wait to read the next chapters! <3
oconje #2
Loved the original story and your writing, and this just shows how much you've grown in your writing skills! Please continue! Your onho stories are amazing which is my otp. But I'll be reading your other jinki pairing stories!
taeminmypants07 #3
Oh my god this story is so heart breaking but beautiful/sweet. I love how you show the depths of the characters' relationships with one another, how they are so closely knit. I am so in this for the long haul :)
MoeSanShawol #4
Chapter 2: Do u know how much i luv original n revise fic^^ The revise so much improve ... i'm just hoping that i can pass through their rough time >< Pls update soon^^
ranma41 #5
Chapter 2: I was so nervous while reading this whole chapter.
I really cannot imagine what Taeyeon & Kibum had to go through.
I'm looking forward to the next update!
melryn05 #6
Chapter 2: omo...it really sad chapters..T^T
I'm waiting your update!!
sarah-in-kpopland #7
Chapter 2: Never mind me while I sob uncontrollably~
onhosmayl #8
Chapter 1: Hi authornim. I'm fan of your "I'll Walk" original and I already read that for 42781 times. :)) That was so beautiful tho, i laughed, cried and so many feeeels!! Anw, Thank you for the original and Thank you for this revised, looking forward to the next chapter. <3
MoeSanShawol #9
Chapter 1: I'm going to read ori first n this revied .... i'm definitelysure to luv this revied fic cos u r 1 of my fav author ^^ pls update next ch ... thz for onho fic ^^
ranma41 #10
Chapter 1: I love it!!! Especially the parts with Jinki & Taeyeon ^^ Looking forward to the next update :)
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