Incredible Things

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A thrilling, action-packed, and one y hell of a love story in which Math genius/babysitter Seo Iseul unfortunately falls for her mysterious employer, Kai. A super bad single dad.                                                   

Foreword

Suzy folds her arms and gives me one of her worried for Iseul and her stupid life choices look. “So you were eating your just-got-fired consolation sundae in this ice-cream shop when—“

“Actually, it said Super Happy Choco Delight Sundae on the menu—”

“And when this old ahjusshi father guy came up to you and offered you a job—“

I pull my own hair in frustration. I love my best friend but she can get reaaally paranoid for my safety at times! “YAH!!  He’s only 26, goddammit!”

“Okay, a young dude who lacks self-control and makes poor life choices offered you a job—“

I give up. I totally give up. 

“You went and accepted this unknown guy’s offer to become, basically, a housemaid—“

I immediately raise my hand to protest. “OBJECTION! UH, he’s not so unknown anymore now! And I’m not a maid, I’m a babysitter!  There’s a huge difference!”

“Well, a babysitter for his son, who you’ve only met for a grand total of…. 30 minutes in your entire 21 years of life—“

“Jongguk, who is also very cute,” I pipe in. 

“Whatever, for all you know he could be Stewie from Family Guy who's basically a devil child from hell. Anyway, the guy is paying you however much you ask for because apparently, he’s a…?” Suzy looks at me expectantly.

“A… desperate father?” I try sheepishly.

“YAH!  I’m talking about what he does! What is it that he does anyway?” Suzy snaps.

I blink twice and give her an innocent shrug. Suzy sighs and mutters something to herself under her breath, probably something along the lines of ‘I cannot believe this ing idiot’ or ‘she’s gonna get herself killed’.  

“Okay, fine,” she sighs, resigned.  What do you actually know about him?”

“Well… He has a 6-year-old son named Jongguk who seems very cute and lovable, he's apparently very busy with his I-don’t-know-what-yet work, and it seems like he's making a lot of money…” I trail off. 

What else, Iseul, what else?! Think! What else do you know about the random mofo who just hired you? ! Suzy’s right, isn't she?! What if he’s an ex-convict in disguise, or like, a drug dealer who’s hiding from his Russian boss or something?! What if—

“You can start making up information now if it helps you relax,” Suzy deadpans. 

“No!” I immediately retort. Ah, it. This is what your gut is for right? So what if I don’t know this guy? All I know is that—

“Currently, he’s my employer, and…” I pause, then grin. Suzy raises an eyebrow.

“He’s also freaking hot.”  


        

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Disclaimer: Copyright neonflowers 2015. I was first inspired to make a mobster/action-themed story by a mobster-themed fic I (still) love so much which is Mobster for Rent by huntress, but apart from that this story isn't inspired by anything else. Any form of plagiarism is strictly not allowed. Please also do not steal the idea of this fic/storyline, especially since I haven't seen another babysitter/mobster crossover fic like this one here on AFF.

[Featured on 24/03/2017 - thank you so much!]

[PLEASE READ 01/2022]: I STARTED THIS FIC WHEN I WAS 15 AND FINALLY FINISHED IT AT 22. Please excuse my childish tone in the earlier chapters if you do decide to check this fic out - I promise it gets a lot better towards the end (skip to chapters 57-59 out if you don't believe me)!!


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[Incredible Things] Finally complete! Thank you so much for joining me on this looong whirlwind journey 🥰 hope you join me on my other stories!

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leechoding #1
Chapter 57: Rereading this for 120th time. I'll never get tired of this story. It's like one of the best fics ever written on this app.
samara12 #2
This is the best fic on AFF. I cried when it ended. It felt something was missing from my life after finishing this. You are best writer ever. Some published books are not even this good. Please don’t ever delete this story. Best of best. My favorite fic of alllllll time… I honestly don’t think I will ever find anything better than this. I promise this is not fake flattery. This really is the best!!❤️
xiuminbaek
#3
Chapter 66: Oh my god. It's take me about a week to finish this. I really love this fic so much 😭😭. The roller coaster emotion i am having for this one is so real. The fact that i kinda hate mark so much for leading iseul to think he likes her. And to hate suzy for treating iseul like . I kinda mad at iseul for being kind to much. She's really a forgiving person. She's really quick to forgive mark for everything he did to her. And have him back as her friend. Also she's quick to forgive Suzy for breaking her relationship with jongin 😭. Eventhough the break really helped their relationship a lot. Also lucas appearance really helped too. I wish i could see them being mushy more before iseul getting back with jongin haha. But at last. I love it how iseul is accepting jongin's back. I love the effort jongin have to get iseul back. Everything in this story is so good and i love it. I love u for giving iseul a best friend she deserve like bom. The one who will stick with her. I thought the getting back between iseul and jongin will be a little hard. Like iseul will be playing hard to get or smthg 🤣. But well she loves him so much. And it's good for them...anyway!! Thank you so much for the fic! I enjoyed them so much!!
theshadyone
#4
Chapter 68: Can’t believe I finished reading this, it took me several days of non-stop fangirling and crying but I finally made it! Thank you for the ride, I simply loved this story with all my heart 💜
Ekale_erie
#5
Chapter 13: I'm seriously doubting Mark!
And who's this new person now?
Ekale_erie
#6
Chapter 12: Don't know why I feel suspicious of Mark...
Ekale_erie
#7
Chapter 8: Oh my God! That last line is just aksjskakakja!!
Ekale_erie
#8
Chapter 5: Jongguk is such a cute lil ball of sunshineeeee!