Chapter 4: When She Steps In...
by i-heart-snsd-seohyun
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Yunni's P.O.V.
Noori had burn marks and bruises all over his body. I stares at him pitifully. During recess, Yasmin and Eunmi noticed that i was in a daze.
Yasmin spoke up, “Yunni? You don’t look okay…”
I remained silent. Maddi walked pass and saw her. She asked, “What’s wrong? If there’s wrong, do speak up.” “We’re here to help you…” Eunmi continued to what Maddi said.
I finally spoke, “I don’t want to see Noori like this anymore! His life is useless if his father continues to treat him like this…” Tear rolled down my eyes after I finished my statement.
Coincidentally, Noori walked by and heard my statement and he felt terrible. He thought: Gosh… A girl that is unrelated to me is worrying for my family issues…
That day, Noori approached me. “Hi Yunni, I know that you are worried cos of my father… but…” he stuttered. “you don’t have to… because I’ll be fine. This is my life and I have to face it, so you don’t have to worry…” “NO!” I was at the verge of tears and I shouted. “ Let me follow you home today, I don’t want your father to hurt you anymore… I don’t want…” “But I don’t want you to be hurt as well…” Noori interrupted. “You cannot just worry for my safety but you also have to be concerned for yours as well…”
I went silent for a while, but i thought of something that will make him change his mind. “Noori, you have forgotten about something….” I said seriously. Noori was puzzled; he didn’t know what he had forgotten. “You forgotten that we had a science research project that we have to do?” I reminded. “Oh… Haish… Thanks for the reminder…” Noori changed his serious and worried face into a relaxed face. “Ok fine, you can come over to my house to do the project…” Noori agreed.
In the afternoon, at the doorsteps of Noori’s house, Noori opened the door to his house. Suddenly, he was being dragged into the house by his father. “Hey! Stop it, Dad!!!!” Noori struggled. Noori didn’t expect his father to return home that quickly because he usually comes home around late night. The door was shut closed, I tried to barge in but I couldn’t, it was locked shut. “Noori!!!!! No!!!!” I cried. I have to call for help, I fished out my phone from my pocket and dialed Callisto’s number.
Callisto's P.O.V.
Beep… Beep… Beep… “Hello?” I answered the phone. That was when Yunni was crying to me on the phone. She was begging me to help her get into Noori’s house. I quickly called Sungmin and we headed down to Noori’s house.
Next chapter: Help On The Way
*Author here!!!! >.< The changes are made to the story. Yunni, im so sorry for getting it mixed up... Pls forgive me.... Anyway, look forward to the next chapter! ^^*
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Minhyukbtob on says:
love this!!
sungmin my bias..
yesyou on says:
i love this!
yowzer135 on says:
I agree on everything
MaddiTeukieTan101 [A] on says:
Were Making a sequel so keep your eyes peeled cause the name will be posted here.
Yasminnie on says:
Aww.. It's sad that this story is ending, but at the same time I'm happy for all of them. They got their own well.. happy ending ^^
I hope you'd make the sequel ^^
Hwaiting~!
MaddiTeukieTan101 [A] on says:
Her parents are so greedy.
Yasminnie on says:
D:
So, its all because off her Grandpa's assets? Am I the only one that think its an immature reason? *sigh*
She shouldn't waste her precious life..
Hyewon is so Mean Dx
(You don't have to be sorry, Its for the sake of the fanfic anyway :3)
i-heart-snsd-seohyun [A] on says:
maddi! well,(some spoiler) next chapter's gonna show how kangho and soomi are somehow related.
MaddiTeukieTan101 [A] on says:
I didn't even discuss with her yet. Sigh. Oh well...I never really liked Soomi anyways...
Yasminnie on says:
O.O
Hyewon doing drugs, Sungmin rush to the emergency, and now WHAT?! Soomi's gonna commit suicide? :ooooo
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