Opposites

Description

Jongin has always been taught to never jump into conclusions, but he never learns.

 

 

 

 

Genre: Sci-fi/Fantasy, Romance, Drama

Rating: R

Warnings: Violence, , and non-major character death

Length: 19,331 words

 

Foreword

 

 

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Jongin wakes up to the usual seventeen o'clock alarm, with his cheek plastered against the metallic sides of the window frame, wind blowing against his hair, and Chanyeol's weight on his left arm. He looks out of the window and finds that they've just arrived inside Central City.

Up close, Central City feels entirely like a whole different place; The lights shone brigther, the smoke thicker, and the people were busier. Their bus passes through a bustling street of vendors, and Jongin inches away from the window frame as people with baskets shout their products into the bus' every opening. He doesn't escape the hand that grabs him by collar, though; One that belonged to a woman with gold teeth.

Your palm tells me something big is awaiting you, boy. A choice—”

Jongin manages to free himself from the woman's grip and for the first time during the day, he's thankful that the bus was moving.

 

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A/N: This fic is also posted on my livejournal account! Enjoy reading!

Special thanks to(for the awesome reviews!):

Ameliorate Review Shop

iRaine
If you have any questions regarding this story, don't be afraid to drop by at http://ask.fm/soopremo !

Comments

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Emmazp18 #1
Beautiful and amazing fic, it left me broken and happy, I don't know.
kyunguin
#2
Chapter 3: Whyyyyy T_T sequel juseyo </333
eddicosta #3
Someone said, and I'm saying it again... WE WANT A SEQUEL!!
wolfiester #4
Chapter 3: Best.Story.Ever.I've been wanting to read something like this but I never found it,and now I FINALLY DID!Thank you so much for writing this!/bows/*throws confetti at you*
dauqspredeht #5
Chapter 3: and i somehow get that that could possibly the best ending for both of them seeing the situation they are in. it could've been worse so im glad that both of them are alive and none of them died. XD lol what am i saying. dont mind me author-nim. XD
dauqspredeht #6
Chapter 3: “—how the
numbers on my forearm glowed on the night
I first met you.”

author-nim why?! T_T I'm crying. they didn't even get their happy ending, well they still talk but you get me. why why! i hate you T_T



but no, i love you. this is very good honestly. i havent read good sci fi since Revolution by Purpleskies and Aegis by Choksi.

uhm, one thing though, i feel like you haven't put much details on the settings,starting from the part where jongin is going to the dextro until the last part, and also details on little things like this certain part of the story feels like hanging or just suddenly stopped and i feel hanged and i somehow felt that this part should've been longer. the first part of the story, you nailed it! that's all i saw anyway, I'm sorry, if you don't understand my explanations, don't worry, i don't understand it myself too. XD ;_; But i really like the way you write and i want you to improve a lot. i'm surprised that with this kind of amazing fic, you werent featured yet. i hope you get a star beside the title of this fic soon so they would also read your awesome work! fighting!
Sentfromheavendotcom
#7
Chapter 3: I think this is perfect. It has kind of a bittersweet ending, but still very perfect. I know that Jongin made the right choice yet my Kaisoo feels TT^TT Thank you for your hard work author, it's very worthy.
About the improvements that you want a feedback, I think that maybe your description or foreword don't really do a justice to what is written here and perhaps that's the reason why it's still so unknown.
moanforkaisoo
#8
RAINE WE WANT A SEQUEL
joppingbunny
#9
Chapter 3: MY FEEEELS OMG THIS IS SO GOODDD
peppery #10
Chapter 3: OMG i totally loved this!!! The universe you built here was so interesting and lovely, and id really love to read a sequel of this (●´∀`●)