One-shots

Description

collection of one-shots / pieces i tell myself i will continue on writing but chances are i'll never update them lmao

Foreword

this started as a fanfic exchange thing with a friend (first three chapters) but i think it'll become the place where i post pieces that look half like a chapter (in both quality and length terms) for which i have no idea what to write next .... 

a small warning that the first chapters are pretty bad but it gets better, i promise.

 

 

comments are greatly appreciated! ^^

as always, hope you guys enjoy~

Author's Thoughts
ma-jewelry
hi guys guess who updated :)
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daiyouin #1
Chapter 8: Smooth taeyang smoooooth
wi2nqs #2
Chapter 1: So hakyeon is a possessive cat.....
Hmmm.....interesting...
toluene #3
Chapter 1: I haven't started reading this yet but when I get the time, I'll be looking forward to it.
HyukBingsu #4
Chapter 6: Deymmm! This one is too good. Hope you'll continue this
Kleedonghae #5
Chapter 6: skldjfhnsdkjfhjksd!!
awesomeness! <33
veeveeandesu #6
Chapter 2: Okay wow. This is just one of those stories that make absolutely no sense to me but for some reason I become really really attached to and can't stop reading. It was the style; the "diary entry" like structure, memorable moment after moment and the vagueness of the plot just added to the overall dream-like thoughtful tone to the overall piece. Really, really beautifully written btw, love your choice of words, two parts in particular, and you might think ?? why these parts? But it's just me:

"Your hair seemed to have grown longer. Or was it shorter? They skipped across your eyes as the wind blew past: a barrier."

"Your presence still lingered in my field of vision, like a scratch on a phone screen. "

I interpreted your piece as quiet shy Taekwoon being misunderstood in the worst way possible. You wrote in on of my favourite styles, by the way, one that makes me think, where the plot can be somewhat open to interpretation, but the feelings are still strong. I read it like, three times. It seems like you're confused too, and you're not sure about what you wrote, but I think that's also a beauty in it. Emotions aren't fixed, aren't clear. I'm torn between deciding whether the diary writer has feelings for the other or not at times too. But that's love I guess. You DID tag neo, after all.

The only thing, I guess, was that Hakyeon usually doesn't cuss to that degree, so that threw me off a little. He can be cruel, I guess, but such heavy cussing usually isn't in his character. Otherwise, I loved this <3 Thank you for this~ It's something I'd read before I go to bed :)
jinjineuntae #7
nice story!
veeveeandesu #8
Chapter 1: AASDKHGDFDFG now that it makes sense... (haha)

THE ENDING. So glad you added it in. Changes everything .
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