Chapter 1: I don't know why I'm a er for Gdae fics that have Jiyong pining for Daesung. I wish we knew the reason for the end of their relationship, but it probably doesn't matter since the aftermath is much more poignant.
Chapter 1: Strangely, the description said it all. I only realized that once I finished reading the story though. Twice.
I feel like there's a lot I want to say about this, but I can't bring it out in words. I feel bad for Jiyong, and I feel bad for Daesung. Every word hooked itself on my heart and started tugging it. It's beautiful, yet it hurts. Thank you for writing this
Chapter 1: I didn't want to read it at first, because it's tagged gdae as well, but now that I read it, I want to reread it at least another eight times. This was beautiful, thank you
Chapter 1: Heart. Aches. For. Jiyong. And. Daesung. You kinda killed me when Jiyong said "fresh air." No Jiyong uuughhh. Like I said. Heart. Aches. Great job!
Chapter 1: I love this. I honestly do. But you know I always tend to love your oneshots like crazy and I cherish them to the fullest. I didn't know you're taking requests again though. Does that mean I can PM you again for that?
Now about the story (instead of my nagging); I love it. I love how it doesn't shuffle around and just goes straight to the point. That Jiyong can't, and shouldn't. The emotions again, Ava. So raw and I love it. I so, so, soooo love it.
You know there are two lines that keep echoing through my mind and it's killing me. The first one is Jiyong's text saying "It didn't fit." Because the meaning goes being the point of just saying that the song doesn't match the rest of the album. He's talking about them, and how it just won't work out because he can't, and he shouldn't.
The second one undoubtedly is "Fresh air." I know it sounds ridiculous like this but god did that do things to my heart. I just felt myself in air because it got me good (or bad, whatever). To me that moment was chill-inducing and I just felt frustrated but also glad, because they just go back to joking around. And that's nice. They're still friends despite it all, and that's incredibly precious.
This story is precious. Once again you delivered a diamond. Thank you for writing <3
Chapter 1: so.... ur a gdae shipper like me huh? do u know anymore gdae fics? finished ones that is, cuz i hate to start reading a good one and its not done.
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