A Thing of Legends

Description

That time when I ran into Lee JInki.

Foreword

This is my first fanfic here, and it's a one shot. Show love and constructive criticism is you want!! I love writing so here it is!!

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It was one of those ridiculous Christmas parties. The ones that major corporations love to throw. Glad I went to this one. 

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sweaty #1
Chapter 1: i can see you have potential as writer ! congrats on writing your first fanfiction btw ^____^

the concept was original(? i dont read many fanfictions...so dont take my word) but i felt as if the delivery of your idea was a bit off? i feel as if you were simply trying to capture a moment in the character's life and there wasn't much room for developing a character, however you couldn't definitely defined the narrator more .

either way very cutue story ^____^
alex1216 #2
Chapter 1: Very cute story ! though I wish it would be longer, good job :)
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