The Lost Retreat

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---something that he said pensively at that moment, in that soft baritone of his, you felt you’d remember all your life...

 

 

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Something that I was inspired with recently. I'm SO sorry for making my lovely readers wait for so long for another piece from me. Hope you guys like it! And as always, I love you, my amazing readers. <3 ~

 

 

31lily
wrote one after ages. hope you guys like it ~

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annewufan
#1
Chapter 1: I think I'm gonna cry for no reasons
loveforfics
#2
wait...i left a comment here like 2 days ago TT^TT my long comment is gonneeee~~~~
ANYWAY!!!!
So in this fic i didnt picture Jinki or any SHINee member, i just made up a random guy and even if the male leads character wasn't described, i love how the scenario sought of built him up
a fictional character but with an ease of creation. my mind was just floating away with ur story
from the detailed description of the area the feelings and the situation
AND I FREAKING LOVE DETAILING OK!! its always missing in a lot of fics but not in urs
the girl in the story really did feel like me and i so wanted to fall in love with the guy, even if i didnt know him
but the setting and the creation of him was so perfect (i have no way of exactly putting it in words)
i love how u spring stories from small inspirations, like the worlds happenings is ur muse xD
idk if im making much sense now but it made better sense when i first wrote this comment (AFF on my phone is bad)
none the less, i really hope u might write a little more to this because i want to fall for that fictional boy in this story <3
beautiful work hyung!!!
P.S-i was waiting for ur reply and i didn't get one so i was wondering...sorry i didnt notice that my comment didnt post
heho0004 #3
Chapter 1: Omg...this made me want to cry..It's really beautiful and i wish this happened to me in reality T^T I'm having a hard time and this story eased it. I'm so thankful. I wish i could hug you because you just gave me hope by this story. It opened my eyes and gave me some light to my darkness. I wish i could hug you and thank you and give you something...i really love you TT^TT even thought this story is more simple than the other ones but you almost can give me hope and you always write in so right time..take care lovely! I wish you the best~
fayrenz #4
Chapter 1: Wow I loved this miau ;-; Especially the last line! Oh, so many feels!♥
I don't know why, but it was Yong I imagined *o* ♥♥♥
7SweetLuckycharmz
#5
amazing :)