La Petite Mort

Description

Title: La Petite Mort

Pairing: Onho

Genre: fluff (?)

Rating: PG-13

Warning(s): a lot of flirting and a general misuse of the French language

Word count: 1185

Summary: Minho wasn’t lost.  He knew exactly where he was.  He was standing right in front of a shoe shop, catty-corner to a very fancy cafe.  He just wasn’t 100% on where said shoe shop and cafe were in relation to say… his hotel.  

Okay, maybe he was just the teensiest bit lost.

Maybe.  

Okay, definitely.

Lost in a foreign country.  Alone.  And the only words he knew were “hello,” “bathroom,” and a certain male body part that was used as an unsavory insult.  None of which were very helpful at the moment.  

 

Prompter: Franzi (taeminmakesmesmile & franzithebookworm)

Prompt: Onho meeting coincidentally in a large city abroad (for example Paris)

Foreword

The was a prompt I wrote for a fic exchange on tumblr.  

 

This is actually my favorite thing ever, okay. it's short and rushed and could have been better but... I. Love. It. 

 

 

It's also unbetaed but what can ya do... 

enjoy and stuff 

 

 

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Dmat17 #1
Chapter 1: Just found this. It’s precious and I love it!!
flrite #2
Chapter 1: Ahahahah i knew what that phrase meant literally but not the euphemism! So i was scratching my head when i read the title i thought this was going to be smthg tragic. What a delicious little fic minho certainly will have a beautiful night ahead of him hehe
oconje #3
Chapter 1: Awesome! Love your Onho! I just wish it was longer and we got to read about Onho experiencing a petit mort
imyasu #4
Chapter 1: You don't understand how confusing this is for me to read when I knew what la petite mort means and then not getting that it was a euphemism. ;-; but I loved it
DarkaNoir #5
Chapter 1: Hello :)
This ficlet has been sitting into my "to read" label for ages and yesterday I finally found the chance and time to take a look at it; needless to say, I'm so so so glad I did!
Aside from the fact that I generally love onho and find it an incredibly endearing ship (I should definitely read more fics about them; I can't even fathom why I don't ; ; ), this has been especially lovely to read.

Even though it's just a short fic, you managed to set a nice atmosphere and setting in a few lines and even somewhat let us peer into the characters' personalities. Minho is such a ball of cuteness, from his enthusiasm for little things, to his outgoing personality that it's still mixed with a hint of shyness and awkwardness. And Jinki... omg, Jinki just killed me. I am especially fond of Jinki painted as a more self-assured and mischevious man than usual (or better say, than how authors usuallyy describe him as) and I like how you created a perfect balance between this kind of Jinki (somewhat different from our delusional fan-like expectations of the "precious dubu" and thus a tad more realistic), and Jinki as the cute, bashful guy we just can't resist.
Then ending, mischevious and speaking of a very interesting future development was the cherry on top, really.
I loved every single line of this drabble and all I can so is congratulating you yet again for the awesome job! :3

I'm honestly tempted to insert it into the fic rec section in my blog; would you eventually mind that? Let me know :)
Well, this said...have a wonderful day <3
minholover1018 #6
Chapter 1: Pls. Have a sequel I love it I want more:)))
Trueyoochunfan #7
Chapter 1: NOOOO this was WAY too short!!!! I love Onho! I need moooooreee! Shy Minho and Jinki is PERFFFF <3
SHINeeLove05 #8
Chapter 1: last part...omg xD
keke cute fic <3
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